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March 2019
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Boroughs Publishing Group
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The Sunshine of Your Love
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Saint
When being a surgeon was no longer possible, Dr. Frank
"Saint" Jeffrey left his life in NYC & moved to DTLA where
he bought a run-down building hoping to resurrect it, along with his
soul. learn
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The Devil's Caress
Recently, Lucifer has lost the most effective female
demon in history & when he scours the earth for a worthy replacement
his attention is drawn to the nascently rebellious daughter of a heinous
Louisiana politician. learn
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Good Trouble
Everything from her past screams for Annie to
disregard the charming, sexy, footballer who won’t take no for an answer,
but Erik is relentless... and, dammit, too understanding to ignore. learn
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Untamed
Belle was the last person who expected to become
friends with the gorgeous, remote, new guy who became a student at their
high school in their last year, but, as she learns, she’s the only one he
can trust. learn
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Harmony
Crashing her car in front of a farm in Wisconsin was
not the spa day Jordan had planned, but oh the joys that lie within that
farmhouse made the accident the best day of her life. learn
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Played
Becki and Calon struggle to find balance as they try
to find their footing in their new relationship in the midst of the rock
world’s demanding life and nocturnal chaos. learn
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Tips & Answers to Qs
Watch for
Common Grammar Mistakes
Subject-Verb Agreement Errors
The subject and verb of a
sentence must agree with one another in number whether they are singular or
plural. If the subject of the sentence is singular, its verb must also be
singular. If the subject is plural, the verb must also be plural.
Incorrect: An important part of my
life have been the people who stood by me.
Correct: An
important part of my life has been the people who stood by me.
Misplaced Or Dangling Modifier
(copy editors note these errors often)
A misplaced modifier is a
word, phrase, or clause that is improperly separated from the word it
modifies or describes. Sentences with this error can sound awkward,
ridiculous, or confusing. A dangling modifier is a word or phrase that
modifies a word not clearly stated in the sentence.
Incorrect: After finally setting
off on the trail, the morning felt more exciting.
Correct: After
finally setting off on the trail, she felt the morning was more exciting.
Thank you to our friends at Authority.
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Cliffies
Ah, another great
debate: Should you end your book with a cliffhanger? Short answer – it
depends.
What type of
cliffhanger are you writing? If you are going for the classic ending where
one or both MCs are in unresolved danger that is continued or solved at the
beginning of the next book, join a big club. Weekly serials shown in early
movie theaters were notorious for employing this format. Obviously, it
brought people into theaters to find out what happened next, and the same
can be true IF your book is successful enough to have people’s interest in
the outcome of the cliffhanger.
How do you
determine whether and/or where to put the cliffhanger?
Be honest with
yourself. Are you an established author with a large readership? Do you
feel confident your readers will wait for another book to find out what
happens to the MCs? Or, is having a cliffhanger going to annoy your readers
because they didn’t get a HEA or HFN?
Are you writing a
duo, or are you writing a multi-book series? If you’re writing a series,
does it make sense to put the cliffhanger in the first book, the middle of
the series or in the second to last book? Perhaps, if you’re writing a
multi-book series, the better option is to have continuing story lines
where a couple of characters are secondary and are dancing around each
other in one book and become the primary characters in the next. Or, you
can have an overarching storyline that involves danger to a place or a
specific group of people. This way each couple can have their HEA or HFN,
but as the danger becomes worse before it is eradicated, it remains real
and ever-present in each book in the series.
If you are using
the cliffhanger as a plot device, what benefit does it serve other than
getting people to buy the next book? There has to be a bigger question
answered than saving the MCs – the “what next” should play into a larger
outcome.
Stay tuned… until
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