Friday 13 October 2023

Retreat West October workshop

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October Zoom Workshops

Make time for your writing!

 

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Hello friends, we’ve got another great selection of Zoom workshops for you this month looking at lots of different aspects of craft and the writing life. Starting at just £5 for 1-hour sessions, even if you can’t make the live time you’ll get sent the recording afterwards if you buy a ticket.


October Workshops

SATURDAY 14TH – 16.00 – 18.00 BRITISH SUMMER TIME

FAIRY TALES MEET CRIME FICTION WITH TANIA HERSHMAN (ONLY 7 TICKETS LEFT)

Writers have been using fairy tales as inspiration for centuries, borrowing characters, structures and general fairytaleishness for their short stories. And many fairy tales involve crimes: Goldilocks’ breaking & entering of the Three Bears’ home; Jack’s murder of the beanstalk-based giant; Bluebeard’s heinous serial killing; the Snow Queen kidnapping Kai, and so many more. So it only seems natural to bring these two genres together and see what ensues. 

Come join us and see what you create in this collision! 

Workshop host: Tania Hershman’s second poetry collection, Still Life With Octopus, was published by Nine Arches Press in July 2022 and her debut hybrid novel, Go On, a “fictional-memoir-in-collage”, was published by Broken Sleep Books in Nov 2022. Tania is the editor of Fuel: An Anthology of Prize-Winning Flash Fictions Raising Funds to Fight Fuel Poverty, published in Feb 2023. 

Her poetry pamphlet, How High Did She Fly, was joint winner of Live Canon’s 2019 Poetry Pamphlet Competition and her hybrid particle-physics-inspired book ‘and what if we were all allowed to disappear‘ was published by Guillemot Press in March 2020. 

Tania is also the author of a poetry collection, a poetry chapbook and three short story collections, and co-author of Writing Short Stories: A Writers’ & Artists’ Companion (Bloomsbury, 2014). She is co-creator of the @OnThisDayShe Twitter account, co-author of the On This Day She book (John Blake, 2021), and has a PhD in creative writing inspired by particle physics. www.taniahershman.com

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SATURDAY 21ST – 16.30-18.30 BRITISH SUMMER TIME

WHAT’S YOUR STORY REALLY ABOUT? WITH DEBBI VOISEY

Identifying themes, sub-themes, micro-themes, and finding the true heart of your story. From these realisations, you can open your idea up to create more than one story – ideal if you are working on a connected collection or a novella-in-flash. With tips, exercises and prompts, and plenty of writing time.

Workshop Leader: Debbi Voisey writes flash fiction, short stories and novels. She had two novellas-in-flash published in 2021 (Only About Love with Fairlight Books, and The 10:25 with Flash: The International Short-Short Story Press). Only About Love received a special mention in the 2022 Saboteur Awards and was shortlisted for the Arnold Bennett Prize 2022.  

Debbi is currently seeking an agent and publisher for her novel, The Reset, which is written in short, flash-like chapters. She is also working on her next novel whilst running creative writing workshops, events, and courses on Zoom, and offering mentorships and guidance for people working on writing projects. She also works with Retreat West running Friday Flashing sessions, the Monthly Micro workshop and the monthly feedback group for our community members.

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SATURDAY 28TH – 18.00-20.00 BRITISH SUMMER TIME

FABULOUS FIRST CHAPTERS WITH AMANDA SAINT

In this 2-hour workshop you’ll discover all the things your first chapter needs to do to ensure your reader connects with the character, world and story you’re creating. We’ll look at first chapters in lots of different genres to show how it’s done and you’ll leave knowing how to make your first chapter the best that it can be.

Workshop Leader: Amanda Saint started Retreat West in 2012 and launched Retreat West Books in 2017 (Winner: Most Innovative Publisher 2020 Saboteur Awards). She has been designing and teaching online courses, and live workshops, for many years and has worked as an editor on hundreds of manuscripts. 

She’s the author of two novels, As If I Were A River (2016), which was longlisted for the Guardian Not The Booker Prize, a NetGalley Top 10 Book of the Month and a Book Magnet Blog Top 20 Book of 2016; and Remember Tomorrow (2019 ). She’s just completed a novella-in-flash, has almost finished a flash fiction collection, and is just starting work on her third novel. Amanda is also training to be a mindfulness teacher and writes The Mindful Writer.

Amanda’s stories have been widely published; long/shortlisted in the Mslexia Flash Fiction Competition, Fish Flash Fiction Prize, Ink Tears Short Story Prize, Cranked Anvil Short Story Competition, Flash 500 and V300; nominated for Best Small Fictions 2023; and won the Editor’s Choice Prize at 101 Words.

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Happy writing everyone! Hope to see you at a workshop soon!

With love,


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Craft Development: Movement in Flash

The Suggestion of Plot and Instilling a Narrative Drive

 

“Is plot essential in flash fiction? I can only stress the importance of plot in any literary genre. And though flash fiction is its own little devil, getting away with bending many rules, this genre is not excused from plot.”

― Kim Chinquee

Hello friends,

This month I want to look at flash fiction and creating a feeling of movement so that something actually happens in your story. A lot of the flash fictions we read at Retreat West and WestWord don’t have that suggestion of plot so they read like a report of an incident, or an amusing or harrowing anecdote. A small portion of today’s newsletter content is part of the Flash Mini Course that I designed and taught with Mary-Jane Holmes.

The Suggestion of Plot 

In flash fiction, there is little room for complicated, parallel or subplots. In fact, we have to be so close to the climax of the story that plot is really compressed to the “now” moment on the timeline or has to use other tools to expand the writing’s ability to present a sense of a larger story.

Here is an extract from the Rose Metal Press Field Guide to Flash Fiction underlying the importance and nuances of plot in flash. From Kim Chinquee’s essay, “Flash Fiction, Prose Poetry, and Men Jumping Out of Windows.” 

 Is [plot] essential in flash fiction? I can only stress the importance of plot in any literary genre. And though flash fiction is its own little devil, getting away with bending many rules, this genre is not excused from plot. In many cases, the sequence of events in a particular flash may be difficult to distinguish; likely, in flash fiction, plot is often presented in nontraditional ways, arising through other elements necessary to make a successful literary story—character, language, point of view, setting, structure, voice, each element can be accountable for plot. Plot in flash is inclusive and exclusive. For example, rhythmic language in a piece can suggest playfulness, and juxtaposed with some eccentric detail, the combination of these elements here can make a good flash fiction. Deadpan tones of horrifying accounts can justify a plot line. A third-person flash ending in first person can twist a piece and thus render it successful. Providing descriptive elements and omitting events can also work. When used effectively, omission of details can gear a plot. Plot is vital in flash fiction, propelling it to its brevity.

In this story look how the advice about using rhythmic language to add to plot is used. 

Down the Long, Long Line

Mary-Jane Holmes

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The repetition of ‘there’s the..’ gives us the sense of the train moving forwards and of the story moving too. Each one adds another layer to the life of the woman looking out of the window and seeing each of the things that are listed.

And in this one, I have used the switch of narrative point of view from the plural to the singular to bring the change that gives this very short story a sense of plot.

Playing Nurses by Amanda Saint

We wanted to be nurses. What a wonderful past-time it seemed to be; not like a job at all. When mum was in her uniform, ready to go to work, we coveted her upside down watch. We wanted one too, so that we could count heartbeats. Our visions were of hospital wards that were more like boudoirs: soft feather pillows, gossamer curtains and muted lights. Beds filled with glamorous, lounging patients lifting subtly scented wrists to learn the patterns of their pulses.

We made our own upside down watches with cardboard and pens, fastened them to our t-shirts with sticky tape. We pressed our fingers into each other’s wrists, sometimes so hard that it left red marks. Counting heartbeats endlessly. There were no doctors – it wasn’t that sort of game.

Occasionally our teddies and dolls joined in but it wasn’t the same. We liked the feeling that human wrists gave – that faint rhythmic pulsing pushing gently against our fingertips. We saw a TV programme once where a man was checking for heartbeats on someone’s neck, so we did it like that for a while too. The beat was harder to find but much stronger.

One day, the beat in the neck was proving elusive but we kept searching, pressing and squeezing. Searching, pressing and squeezing. It started to hurt. We wanted to stop but we couldn’t. The search for the beat drove us on and on. Searching and pressing and squeezing. Until, in the end, there was no beat to be found. No more beats. No more little pulses pushing against our fingertips. No more we. Just an I.

The feeling of movement, plot and tension also comes from the repetition of ‘searching, pressing and squeezing’ in that final paragraph where it starts to become clear that this game is not as harmless as it first seemed.

Narrative Drive in Flash Fiction

Plot is also an essential tool in providing forward compulsion through the story. Even though it is a very short form you need a narrative driver to compel the reader on. A lack of plot and narrative drive can stop a reader from committing to a flash in just the same way as it can in longer form stories.

In an interview Meg Pokrass did for the Retreat West blog she summed up how you imbue a flash with plot and narrative drive in such a small word count as the loaded moment: "Great flash fiction requires a feeling of dramatic urgency—something which we, the reader, sense in every word. Emotional potency is key." Do read the full interview as it is packed full of brilliant advice!

This ties into that flash fiction has to begin in the middle of the action - setting the story off as close to the climax as you possibly can. Often when we are editing our flashes, you can usually cut the first paragraph or two of a first draft as that is us finding our way into the story. Look out for that loaded moment.

The following stories have put the loaded moment to great use early in the story to give us that feeling of dramatic urgency that gives the flash a narrative drive:

What stories can you recommend that start with a loaded moment that compels you on? Do let me know by replying to the email or commenting on the post on the Substack site. I love finding new examples!

Questions to ask your drafts

Whenever I have written a flash story from prompts, I always find it helpful to ask the following questions to find out what it is I am writing about and how I can make the next draft work harder to achieve what I want it to:

  • Whose story is this? Makes sure I am writing it from the right character’s point of view.
  • Why are they telling it now? What’s happened that they need to share this story now? This provides impetus and the narrative drive.
  • Why are they telling it at all? This is the heart of the story - the theme, the essence, the reason for it.
  • What happens? Makes sure that there is a sense of movement and change.
  • What do I want the reader to feel? Helps with final word choice edits to foreshadow, create atmosphere and get your prose working really hard.

Writing Prompt

Write a story where a character is coming face to face with someone important for the first time in many years, or the first time ever. Start with the meeting, get rid of the set-up and preamble that leads to that pivotal moment. Think about how you can bring in the back story the reader needs to know about these characters without sacrificing your narrative drive and still leaving things implied rather than said. Set a timer for 30 minutes and aim to write a complete first draft of a flash fiction (max 1000 words) in that time.

When you edit the story, think about how you can use rhythm and language to add to the feeling of forward movement.

Happy writing and editing!

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The Mini Novel Course

Workshop 1: From inspiration to outline

 

The full post of this workshop is for paid subscribers and free subscribers can see a short preview. You can sign up for just £8 a month and stay just for the duration of this course, which lasts for 12 weeks as the workshops are posted every fortnight. If you sign up you’ll get access to the last course that ran ‘Experiments in Flash’ too and get great tools and resources to help you write your novel. You’ll be able to share your work for feedback too in the private chat.

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Hello writing friends,

Welcome to the Mini Novel Course. In the 6 workshops that make up this course I’ll be sharing some tools and resources you can use to get off to a great start with a novel project. There are no writing rules, so this course won't provide a formula for writing a novel but will hopefully give you lots of inspiration and ways to make writing a draft of a novel quicker, easier and fun! The workshops are:

  • Week 1 - From inspiration to outline (October 6th)

You'll take your idea and flesh it out while discovering whose story it is and which point of view it will be best to tell it in.

  • Week 2 - Character development (October 20th)

Characters are what make your novel stand out to readers so you'll get to know them inside and out.

  • Week 3 - World-building (November 3rd)

You'll think about where your story takes place and why, and what that can bring to character, atmosphere and plot development.

  • Week 4 - Writing Chapter One (November 17th)

We'll look at all the things beginnings have to do and analyse examples from famous novels to see how it's delivered. Then you'll write your own!

  • Week 5 - Pacing and structure (December 1st)

How to keep your reader gripped and your story flowing by playing with your prose.

  • Week 6 - Keeping the momentum going (December 15th)

How to carry on once the course is over - you'll get tools for overcoming obstacles to get to the end.


From inspiration to outline

This week the focus is on finding the story within your idea, choosing who's best to tell it for you and how, and taking your idea and fleshing it out into an outline aligned to story structure.

So before you read on, please take a moment to add a comment below introducing yourself and your novel idea. You don't have to go into great detail at this point but give us a high-level view of what the novel is about and whose point of view you plan on telling it through.

I want to share some of my experience with you now as it's in writing two novels myself, that I developed the process in this workshop. When I wrote my first novel, As If I Were A River, I did no plotting and planning whatsoever. Why would I? I’d always wanted to be a writer, I'd read novels voraciously ever since I was a child, I definitely knew how to do this. So I set off writing my story knowing just the premise, or my inciting incident, of a woman whose husband went missing. Basically I knew what set the story off and nothing beyond that. The writing of this book looked a lot like this...

I went off on tangents, down dead ends, got lost and very confused. It took me 2 years from writing the first scene in a creative writing class to finally finishing a very short first draft of just under 50,000 words. To properly finishing it and it being published was in total 6 years. 

So when I started writing my second novel, Remember Tomorrow, I took a different approach that made the writing of it look a lot more like this...

I had a complete first draft of 55,000 words in just 8 months that was focused and had a good narrative drive in place. So I cut 16 months off the time it took me to write a first draft by doing some planning and what I call plotting, which is something that real plotters would definitely shake their head at.

And Remember Tomorrow is much more complex and ambitious than my first novel too. It has a much larger cast and takes place in the future so I had to create a whole different world as well.



 

 

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A Word With...Ingrid Jendrzejewski

Our monthly interview series

 

A Word With… is our monthly interview series in which we chat to writers, journal editors and indie publishers about words, stories and life.

We are delighted to welcome Ingrid Jendrzejewski this month. Ingrid currently serves as the Editor in Chief of FlashBack Fiction, an editor at Flash Flood, a flash editor at JMWW, and she is one of the co-directors of National Flash Fiction Day (UK).  She runs workshops on editing, prose poetry and hybrid forms, and we have had the pleasure of her running them for us a few times now. She’s with us again this weekend running a session at our Online Flash Fest on writing funny flash fictions and next month a 1-hour workshop looking at titles: Lions, and Titles and Bears, Oh My!

So here’s what she had to say to my questions…

Ingrid, as a writer, you seem to be happiest creating flash fiction stories with over 70 publications listed on your website. I'm sure there are many more. Can you tell us what you love about this form and what attracts you to writing flash?

Thank you so much for such great questions; it’s a real pleasure to chat with you!

I think what I love most about short-form writing is the process of distillation. Every observation, emotion, description, happening and thought gets reduced to such a pure form, and when everything works together, you get this end product that is somehow dense yet airy, super-specific yet open-ended, highly constrained yet limitless.  There’s no room for equivocation or self-indulgence, and every character on the page gets to pull more than its own weight. A well-rendered flash feels like a parlour trick that unfolds into a new universe — it’s such an exciting thing to witness.

I wrote almost exclusively flash when my daughter was super small.  I was sleep deprived and writing in little cracks of time, so I was drawn to short pieces that I could hold in my head and mull over whilst doing parenting things.  Now that my daughter is older and sleeps through the night, I have a number of longer projects on the go, but I keep coming back to flash.  There’s a unique thrill to writing short…I think it’s the way words take on all these extra layers and stratifications when you compress them.  Writing flash is like constructing little puzzles, tiny wondrous objects.  It’s addictive!  

After doing a degree in creative writing you then did another in physics — can you tell us a bit about this? Did the writing drive an interest in physics or was it always something you wanted to do? How do you bring the two together now in your writing practice?

I have always loved both the arts and sciences and I found it impossible to choose between them, so ended up doing both! I’ve combined them in various ways, such as work in computer game design and research on software for helping people with limited mobility maximise information output with minimal gestures. Both involve thinking about language as well as programming and, in the latter case, information theory.  

I do think this big distinction we make between ‘science’ and ‘arts’ is a bit arbitrary….  Science is nothing without storytelling…when we develop experiments, we’re creating and editing stories about how we think the world works, based on the results we get.  And if we can’t tell others what we’ve learned or how we think our work fits into or pushes against the larger stories we have about what we think we know to be true, our work is useless. We have constraints and rules in our storytelling, and we trust a community of readers to respond to our work and check for errors and help make it better. Science requires creativity and flexible thinking. I am sure that my experience with writing helped immensely with problem-solving and communication.

On the other side of the coin, I think my writing has been immensely influenced by my training in science. Even in an off-the-wall piece, I have a sense of the critical path I need to follow, and what ‘evidence’ I need to include or exclude to take the reader on the journey from Point A to Point B. Writing a lab report or a scientific paper trains one to be succinct, specific, precise. As with flash, there’s no space for tangents, flights of fancy, or wheel spinning. A science degree is incredibly good training for flash writing…and I’ve been pleasantly surprised-not-surprised to find out a lot of great flash writers that I admire have a science or engineering background.

At this particular moment, I’m doing more writing and teaching about writing than I am science or programming, but I do keep a few projects going in the background, for fun.  I’ve also been involved with projects like Quantum Shorts, a flash competition that looks for flash with a quantum physics theme (you can look for a new announcement from them soon) and some science/flash projects I’m running later this year. 

You are currently editor-in-chief of FlashBack Fiction, which specialises in publishing historical flash fiction. What inspired you to start this journal and what has running it taught you as a writer and editor?

FlashBack Fiction great out of a Twitter thread in which someone was looking for places to send historical flash. I believe I was looped into the conversation as a flash writer who had published a few historical pieces. In trying to come up with markets, we came to the collective realisation that there weren’t many places that specialised in historical flash, and several writers of historical flash didn’t feel their work fared well in traditional flash journals. After joking around about some good names for such a journal, we landed on FlashBack Fiction, and I checked to see if it was available, and the rest is, as they say, history!

Working on any journal or competition gives one a good feeling for common themes and things that commonly go wrong in flash.  However, with our historical focus, this project has particularly underscored the incredible power that specific detail and thoughtful diction have to pull a reader into a very particular time, place and historical context. Sometimes it’s only one or two carefully chosen words that communicate everything we need to know about where and when a piece is set.  

Another thing that I’ve learned is how rare and precious humorous, light-hearted, or joyful stories are.  We get a lot of gloom and darkness in our queue, perhaps because a lot of the stories that get passed down about history focus on tragedies, wars, inequality, suffering, etc. It can be hard to match senses of humour or pull off a happy ending without coming off twee or sappy, but when it works, our whole team celebrates.  

Finally, I think our project has taught me a lot about how important voice is.  Early on, we started inviting readers to include recordings of their stories, and I think that can really open a story up to new readers, particularly in a project like ours where we have submissions from around the world.  Sometimes listening to the story read aloud by the author or someone the author chooses can make the story leap off the page.

Another project you're involved in is the annual National Flash Fiction Day (UK), which celebrates the form with the publication of an anthology each year and also the Flash Flood, which publishes flash stories every 10 minutes or so for 24 hours. It has been running for many years now - were you involved from the start or is it a more recent project for you? And how did you get involved with it?

National Flash Fiction Day was founded by Calum Kerr in 2011, and was one of the first places I had flash published. In 2106, I placed second in the Microfiction Competition and after that, I was invited to judge the next one and read for FlashFlood. It felt very surreal moving so quickly from one side of the editorial process to the other, but then in just a couple years more, I ended up a Co-Director of the project.

I have a real soft spot for it because of its commitment to celebrating flash and promoting a welcoming, supportive flash community within the UK and beyond, so when Calum decided to step back in 2018, I was very keen to see it continue. Diane Simmons and I took over the reins (joined by Tino Prinzi in the first couple years), and we’ve tried to build on what Calum started. In the years we’ve run National Flash Fiction Day, we’ve grown the submission pool for the microfiction and anthology projects, massively increased the reach of FlashFlood and have started a ‘Community Flash’ series, re-launched The Write-In (a weekend prompt-writing extravaganza), and held a tenth anniversary novella-in-flash competition.  

For 2024, we are returning to our roots with an in-person anthology launch and some free in-person workshops, but we’ll also be continuing with the online celebrations that took off during the covid pandemic. We’re also very keen for local flash communities around the world to run their own National Flash Fiction Day events locally or online, and are happy to advertise other NFFD events, such as the give-aways Retreat West held in the past. The more people celebrating flash, the merrier!    

Our next celebration is scheduled for 15 June 2024.  If you’d like to get involved, our anthology and microfiction competitions open for submissions in December and FlashFlood opens for submissions for one week only in April.  You can find more information at https://www.nationalflashfictionday.co.uk/

You recently ran a workshop for us on prose poetry for flash writers, and are judging the Prose Poem Prose Poetry Competition later this year. What can you tell us about how prose poetry and flash complement each other, and differ?

Oh, this is such a wonderful question! There is a wealth of critical and academic writing on the subject, as well as lots of different thoughts held by editors of poetry, prose and everything in between….  Since we don’t have days to debate, I’ll limit myself to something that’s hopefully useful from a practice point of view.

For me, if I’m thinking practically as a writer, I think it’s useful to see shortform prose writing as a sort of spectrum, with poetry on one end and heavily narrative-driven pieces on the other.  

On the narrative end, the aim is to get across things like story, plot, character arcs, and all the other ingredients of classic short stories and narrative flash. You might include things like Aesop’s fables, three-minute-mysteries or even jokes in this category: getting the plot information across is of utmost importance here.  

On the poetry end of the spectrum, the aim is perhaps less story-driven. Maybe the story is a little more off-the-page or implied. Maybe there is no story beyond what the reader brings to it. Maybe the piece strives instead to get across a mood or an emotion, or to paint a picture or scene. Maybe the piece is doing something else entirely…perhaps asking us to question how we construct meaning from the symbols we arrange on the page when we write.  

In the middle of this spectrum, there’s a lot of fuzzy overlap between prose poetry and flash, where elements of story are important, but how the story is told is equally important. Pieces that live in this middle zone can get published either as prose poetry or as flash. Different editors and different publications set the cut-off line in different places, so it’s important to read back-catalogues to get a sense of who is publishing what under what label.  I’d personally argue for letting the piece be what it wants to be and then only worry about labelling it if you have to make a decision about whether to send it to a poetry or prose editor.

On your website you run an annual Christmas Puzzle, with the festive season not too far away now, can you give us a hint of what this year's might be; and what inspires you to run these each year?

This is such a quirky project that is close to my heart! I started writing silly Christmas puzzles for my family about 15 years ago, and over time, they’ve grown into things that resemble armchair treasure hunts or puzzlehunt style experiences that I make available online. In the UK, you might have heard of GCHQ’s Christmas Challenge, the classic picture/puzzle book Masquerade, and Pablo’s Armchair Treasure Hunt; my puzzle is in the same vein, though I attempt to make them a little easier! At the end of the day, my family is still the audience I’m writing for here, so it’s pitched to their level of puzzle expertise.

Each year, there is a story; Christmas is under threat in some way and the elves need your help in some way…recovering a password or hacking the North Pole mainframe…something like that. Part of the puzzle is to figure out how the puzzle works, and how to get the final solution.  Usually, there are lots of mini puzzles that you can put together to solve the ‘meta’ or final puzzle, and these can use all manner of tricks…first letters of words, rhymes, rebuses, and common codes, ciphers, and writing conventions (like Morse code, braille, nautical flags, the NATO alphabet, pigpen, Caesar shifts, etc.).  Or perhaps something that looks like an everyday crossword puzzle or sudoku will contain a secret message reading across the diagonal. 

Generally, the bulk of the puzzle is contained in a pdf document so you can print it out and do it in your armchair, though there is often a final online element where you can authenticate your answer (and get a congratulatory message verifying that Christmas has been saved, so that you can rest easy).  The form and length of the puzzle has a lot to do with how busy I am each year!  

Also, I should note that if these puzzles look absolutely intractable to you but you love puzzles, I’m happy to chat with people about getting started with puzzlehunts and armchair treasure hunts.  There’s a small but lovely community of setters and solvers out there, and many more elaborate and polished puzzles than mine!

Incidentally, I think setting puzzles has a lot in common with flash writing. You want to lead the solver through the puzzles in a satisfying way…they need enough information to be able to put the pieces together and solve the puzzle, but not so much that the answer is obvious and there’s nothing to do.  I feel like I do the exact same thing as a flash writer when I try to tell a story but leave satisfying gaps for the reader to fill in….

What can we expect from you next?

Woosh, that is a great question!  

In terms of my own work, I’m fiddling around on some longer projects behind the scenes, but I’m sure I’ll crack and publish more short-form work before I finish.  (My heart always returns to flash!)  In particular, I’m making progress on something that started as a novella-in-flash that just kept growing…it’s now approaching what might be considered novel-like territory, but I’m not going to jinx it by invoking the ‘novel’ word just yet. I’m trying very hard to stay true to my principle of ‘write what wants to be written and then stick a label on it only when you need to package it up for an editor’!

I’m also doing a lot of writing-adjacent work this year, including some competition judging and various workshops and events, some of which I’ll be announcing soon.  You can find out at www.ingridj.com, and of course at Retreat West where I’ve got two upcoming workshops, one on comedy and flash and one on titles…. 


Thanks so much Ingrid for your time and insights. It’s really inspiring to hear about your approach to not labelling stories and just writing!


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