If a story has character development as well
as plot, or action, so much the better, but it must have at
least one of those fundamentals. There are authors, of
course, who can sit down with only a vague idea of what
they are going to do, pound the typewriter for a few hours,
and turn out a finished story that has literally grown out
of the typewriter. They are experts who have mastered all
of the rules and niceties of technique until these
mechanical things have become second nature to them.
Personally, I write a story almost
completely in my mind before I begin to set it down on
paper. In fact, I sometimes carry it to the extreme of
writing the ending of a yarn before I have done the middle
part—that’s when I’m so much interested in the piece myself
that I can’t wait for the filling in—I have to get the
climax down on paper. Naturally, I know just what that
center portion is going to be.
The ideal of the classic short story is to
counterpart the flight of the arrow—leaving the bow with a
twang, flying straight and true, thudding home in the heart
of the target. Too many writers draw a bow at the moon;
their arrow goes up, falters, starts to fall, is blown by
the wind, clatters aimlessly to the ground.
If, when starting their story, they would
say to themselves, “I am going to create one single,
crystal-clear, decisive effect, so that the whole story,
when finished, is a mathematical procession of events
leading logically and irrevocable from the first sentence
to the last.” Then they could be sure that their story
would do what it should—strike one clear chord in the
reader’s emotional reactions.
As the story is built, piece by piece, as
the plot convolutions are taken up, the threads of the
story intertwined, the characters shaped by their actions
and their conversation, as each sentence is added to the
story structure, the writer should bear in mind his finished job,
the completed, unified picture. If a phrase sounds pretty,
but has no bearing on that completed picture, he should
throw it out. If an actor in the drama gets out of
character, does something on page two that does not fit in
with the picture we have of him on the last page, he should
be recast, redrawn, rewritten.
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