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The relationship between writer and editor can be incredibly positive and mutually beneficial as you both learn from each other. But if your expectations aren't aligned, it can also be toxic and infuriating -- for both parties. Wherein lies the balance? We asked professional freelance editor Pam Johnson and award-winning novelist Steven James, frequent collaborators, to map out the 7 deadly sins most commonly committed by their counterpart. Writers, listen up: These insights are going to help you understand the wheels turning in your editor's mind when she made the changes or suggestions that she did. And editors, take note: The language you use and the assumptions you make might be inadvertently offending an author in ways you never even imagined. May you all find hope, ye who enter here. 1. Lack of Communication: Failing to specify expectations. EDITOR'S TAKE: Writers -- please set editing goals, communicate expectations and ask for any clarifications before the editor jumps in. We look at your manuscript with a different set of eyes depending on what you want, so it's important to let your editor know exactly what you want. Also, tell your editor directly if you don't want her to follow grammar rules. We know there are times when an author likes to break conventions. Remember, editors have been trained to point out grammatical errors. So let her know if you've made a stylistic choice to ignore the rules. WRITER'S TAKE: Absolutely. Communication up-front prevents a lot of problems down the line. 2. Sloppiness: Not submitting your best work. EDITOR'S TAKE: You may think, "Well, she's an editor, so she can fix all my typos and errors. I don't need to correct them before I submit." Not true! Poor punctuation, grammar, spelling and so on is so distracting to an editor that she will struggle to concentrate on the story she's been hired to edit. Unless you only want proofreading, please submit as clean a copy as possible. WRITER'S TAKE: Authors -- never settle for sending in less than your best! 3. Stubbornness: Refusing to change your course of action. EDITOR'S TAKE: You have probably hired an editor to point out what she considers to be errors in your manuscript. No, she shouldn't change your "voice," but if something doesn't make sense or the punctuation is confusing, you need to at least consider her suggestions. Don't be married to what may be a fatal mistake in your story. WRITER'S TAKE: I usually think of it this way: Don't fall in love with the first draft. Read More... |
Mackenzie Belcastro addresses writers who
are despairing over their early drafts, highlighting five ways you can
persevere and discover your story within them. Read More...
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Dana Chamblee Carpenter recalls a panel on
which Anne Perry tossed aside the idea that the historical fiction writer had
a responsibility to get everything "right." We're storytellers,
after all, not historians.
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Ahead of NaNoWriMo and the WD Novel Writing
Conference, Grant Faulkner shares a great technique for gathering excellent
details for your story: a "story field trip" -- an imaginative
scavenger hunt to gather details, sensory information, and character
insights.
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The latest edition of Robert Lee Brewer's
column, "Why I Write Poetry," comes from Ravishu Punia who writes,
"Through poems, words say nothing and yet, they utter everything." Read More...
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In this episode of the Writer's Digest
Podcast, Heather Graham shares: Why writers need editors and editors need
writers, tips to carve out time for your writing in your already busy life,
the benefits of writing groups, and more. Read More...
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The Reaper Knocks: There's a thunderous knock at the door. You open it to find
an improbably tall, black-robed figure towering over you with a scythe in one
bony hand. The figure peers at you for a long moment, then looks down at a
clipboard in its other hand. Then back at you. Then back at the paper. It has
no apparent face, but you sense that it is puzzled.
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by Jane K. Cleland
In 1962, Alfred Hitchcock and Francois Truffaut discussed their work during a marathon session that lasted for days. The two great directors and their French/English interpreter barely paused for meals. It was during this conversation that Hitchcock outlined his famous surprise versus suspense scenario -- the bomb planted in the cafe. He used this example to demonstrate that, contrary to popular belief, suspense is far more engaging than surprise. Here's how it goes: Say you have a scene where two characters are talking in a cafe, and a bomb suddenly goes off under the table. The unexpected action will make the audience experience surprise. Your readers' emotional and physiological reactions are likely to be similar to the heart-stopping adrenaline rush a child feels the first time he opens a jack-in-the-box. Can you remember your first time? If you're like most people, you were startled, and for a few seconds the experience was all consuming. You didn't think of anything else; you didn't notice anything else. Your entire focus was on processing what just happened. That's the power of surprise. Contrast that experience with this one: You witness a man approach a café where two people are drinking coffee, enjoying a pleasant morning chat. You see the man step behind a column and turn an old-fashioned alarm clock to 1:00. It's taped to a bomb. A clock mounted on a nearby wall informs you it's 12:45. You watch as the clock ticks down the time. Now it's 12:49. The people keep chatting. Now 12:52. The woman laughs. It's 12:57. They finish their coffee. And now it's 12:59. How do you feel now? If you're like most people, you're holding your breath, waiting for the explosion -- or for a hero to rush in and save the day. This approach, revealing to the viewer or the reader what's going on while the unsuspecting characters chatter on, translates into 15 minutes of suspense. All the immediate explosion bought us was 15 seconds of surprise. [Don't miss Jane's sessions at the 2018 Writer's Digest Novel Writing Conference in Pasadena, CA, October 26–28!] The difference between the immediate explosion and the one we anticipate is that in the latter example, we were fully informed. While the surprise flared up, catching you unaware, the suspense slowly burned, drawing you in. Thus the question arises: If suspense is so much more gripping than surprise, and if the effect is more lasting, why employ surprise at all? The answer provides a twofold peek into the writer's toolbox. First, surprise can spark delight in a reader all on its own, and second, it is one of the most reliable ways to launch your readers into situations fraught with heightened tension -- a cornerstone of suspense. To keep your readers on the edge of their seats, you need to integrate surprises that lead slowly, inexorably and with deadly calm, to suspense. In order to do so, you need to understand what makes a surprise effective. The Anatomy of Surprise There are good surprises, such as an unanticipated visit from a much-loved distant friend or relative, and bad surprises, such as an unexpected cancer diagnosis. Good or bad, all surprises share one key characteristic -- they're unforeseen. Integrating surprise into your stories can delight, intrigue, captivate, titillate, move, worry and/or inspire your readers. The trick is to set up such surprises so they feel fitting, not merely plunked down for effect. Read More... |
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"The exercises conveyed the importance
of creating a visual in your writing -- an image that evokes an emotion or
idea." Erika Hoffman details her experience in a writing workshop that
challenged participants to use tarot cards to generate story ideas through a
series of writing exercises.
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When approaching NaNoWriMo prep (or
NaNonFiWriMo for nonfiction writers), you must create a strategy before the
event to help you maintain a positive and enthusiastic mindset and productive
habits no matter what life throws your way during that 30-day period. Read More...
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Few authors have better embedded believable
and/or accurate scientific information within an engrossing story like
Michael Crichton. This article explores the tactics Crichton used to craft
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Readers make snap judgements on what to read
or not read. And they often rely on titles of books, articles, blog posts,
and conference sessions to make those decisions. As such, writers must learn
how to write better titles to find more success with their writing. Robert
Lee Brewer explains how.
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While few authors
have the creative skills to design their own book covers, understanding the
design process and how covers impact sales is critical to working directly
with a freelance designer or your publisher's marketing team, and offering
productive feedback. Learn:
Join us live on Wednesday, October 17 at 1
PM EDT for this free Writer's Digest webinar featuring Suanne Laqueur,
Patrick Knowles, Ricardo Fayet and WD's Jess Zafarris to learn everything you
need to know about book cover design, and get insightful tips on how to get
the best covers possible for your books. This webinar is sponsored by Reedsy. Read More...
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Lost Dog: The
family dog has been missing for weeks, and everyone is devastated (except
that one family member, of course). Suddenly, the dog returns, showing up out
of nowhere. Almost everyone rejoices. But as time goes by, it becomes clear
that something isn't quite right with the beloved canine companion...
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Yes, you can write a draft of your
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concrete tools to achieve your goal. If the only thing that’s holding you
back from getting words on the page is no plan, this webinar has all the
answers.
Literary agent Carly Watters has been coaching authors through first drafts for a decade and she’ll present a comprehensive strategy to “winning” National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo): a 50,000+ word draft in 30 days. This webinar is all about volume and getting 1,667+ words written per day. Whether you’ll be joining a “5am Writers’ Club,” writing during your lunch breaks at work, or after your kids have gone to sleep—it’s possible for everyone. The webinar will focus on character sketches, detailed storyboarding, realistic schedules, and tips to keep up your momentum through the full month of daily writing. There will be roadblocks, but you’ll be better positioned to succeed with the more preparation you can do in advance. |
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Interested in keeping your audience on the
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structure and elements of suspense to keep readers turning pages.
And what better way to learn than with a master of suspense at the Writer’s Digest Novel Writing Conference in Pasadena! Agatha Award–winning author Jane K. Cleland will teach the key elements—and more—from her instructional book, Mastering Suspense, Structure & Plot, on Thursday, Oct. 25, the day before the conference begins. When you attend the session, you’ll use Jane’s Plotting Roadmap to leave with a fully developed plotting plan for your novel. Jane will also demonstrate how to integrate plot twists, plot reversals and moments of heightened danger at tactically sound moments. These strategic moves can help quicken the pace and focus the action in your scenes. This session is available as a standalone ticket for $199, or as an add-on to your conference registration for just $149. If you register for the whole conference, be sure to catch Jane’s conference sessions on Friday: Overcome Writer’s Block and Release Your Inner Muse and The Art of Distraction: Using Red Herrings. If you’re interested in Jane’s hands-on session on suspense, structure and plot, be sure to register soon! It will sell out! |
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Collecting articles from editor Dan Koboldt’s popular blog series for writers
and fans of speculative fiction—plus a collection of never-before-published
articles—Putting the Science
in Fiction connects you to experts in the field. Scientists,
engineers, medical professionals, and others share their insights in order to
debunk the myths, correct the misconceptions, offer advice on getting the
details right, and help writers create more realistic yet engaging stories to
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Yes, you can write a draft of your
book in a month! Don’t let limited time, busy lives, or other obstacles get
in your way of writing the book that is in you. A manuscript in 30 days
requires thoughtful preparation, strategic planning, a strong sense of
discipline and loads of enthusiasm—and this live webinar will give you the
concrete tools to achieve your goal. If the only thing that’s holding you
back from getting words on the page is no plan, this webinar has all the
answers.
Literary agent Carly Watters has been coaching authors through first drafts for a decade and she’ll present a comprehensive strategy to “winning” National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo): a 50,000+ word draft in 30 days. This webinar is all about volume and getting 1,667+ words written per day. Whether you’ll be joining a “5am Writers’ Club,” writing during your lunch breaks at work, or after your kids have gone to sleep—it’s possible for everyone. The webinar will focus on character sketches, detailed storyboarding, realistic schedules, and tips to keep up your momentum through the full month of daily writing. There will be roadblocks, but you’ll be better positioned to succeed with the more preparation you can do in advance. |
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Carly Watters began her publishing career in London at the Darley Anderson Literary, TV and Film Agency. She has a BA in English Literature from Queen’s University and a MA in Publishing Studies from City University London. Since joining PSLA in 2010 Carly has had great success launching new authors domestically and abroad. |
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Over the last
decade, the publishing industry has undergone tremendous evolution due to the
growth of online retail and digital books, as well as the power of any author
to publish and distribute their work at the click of a button. But which path
is right for you and your book—and how do you sift through the increasing
number of hybrid publishers and services that make a lot of promises, but
cost you a lot upfront?
Jane Friedman discusses everything you need to know about how book publishing operates today, in plain English, to help you understand the pros and cons of every major publishing path available. She'll cover New York traditional publishing and what projects are well-suited to being represented by literary agents; the capabilities of mid-size publishers and independent publishers; how to evaluate small presses, micro-presses, and digital-only presses; what "hybrid" publishing is (or thinks it is) and how to evaluate such companies; and all forms of self-publishing and e-publishing practiced today. |
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Jane Friedman spent 15 years working inside the traditional publishing industry and is the former publisher of Writer’s Digest. In addition to being a columnist with Publishers Weekly and an instructor with the Authors Guild, she is a professor with The Great Courses on the topic of how to get published. |
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Middle Grade is one
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industry. For many, middle grade novels are childhood favorites that stick
with us for decades-whether these stories are realistic portrayals of life or
fantastical escapes from the mundane. Middle Grade is a competitive market,
and it's a difficult category to master. There are many expectations
surrounding voice, character, content, and structure that go along with
writing middle grade novels. How can you make your manuscript stand out in
the crowded middle grade market? And how can you catch the attention of a literary
agent with your manuscript?
Mastering Middle Grade: Writing, Revising, and Pitching Your Middle Grade Manuscript covers the most important topics to keep in mind while writing and revising middle grade novels, as well as the process of writing a query letter that will effectively pitch your manuscript and entice literary agents. This live webinar includes a live presentation, a Q&A session, a critique of your query letter and the first 1000 words of your manuscript, and downloadable worksheets that will help you write, revise, and pitch your manuscript long after the webinar is over. |
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Maria Vicente is a literary agent at the P.S. Literary Agency. She is a creative and editorial agent, providing support to her clients through all stages of the writing and publication process. Maria is dedicated to managing authors' literary brands for the duration of their careers. Her reading preferences vary across categories and genres, which is reflected in her client list. |
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What’s your genre as
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Each first-place
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There’s also no better trio of keynote speakers we could have assembled. While you’ll benefit from the completely customizable schedule, opportunities to network with fellow writers, and kick back at the Halloween-themed costume party on Saturday night, listening to three New York Times bestselling authors will be a highlight of the event! From crime to young adult to literary, these three are can’t miss speakers:
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Writing requires three layers of mastery.
First, a writer must learn to master stories. People may think in stories, talk in stories, read and watch and hear stories all day long, but life itself, the thing about which we are always telling stories, has no beginning, middle, or end. Life doesn't see protagonists or antagonists, doesn't value one experience over the other. In fact, life doesn't even recognize adjectives and adverbs: It's made of nothing but nouns and verbs.
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And yet the writer must learn to look at life, at the great teaming, streaming, swarm of things and thoughts and people and creatures and pull from it a fraction of what he or she sees and string the most interesting characters and ideas and events together in the most compelling way he or she can. The writer knows the stories are illusions in a way, and yet these inventions, brief as they are, have the capacity to remind us of the whole of life. There is no formula for how best to do this. Instead, the writer must spend his or her days asking and asking and asking this question: What is so interesting about what interests me? The answer is a story. Next, a writer must master what we call craft. Writers translate life, a three-dimensional and five-sensory experience, into nothing but words, which are themselves nothing but thoughts. Every other art form directly engages at least one of our five senses. Writers don't get sound, or motion, or touch, or color, or shape. The writer must be interested in this unique translation, must be willing to leave his or her body behind for a time, leave behind the unshakable limitations of time and space for the limitless, formless silence of the imagination. Read More... |
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Literature comforts in a way clinical definitions
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illness in themselves long before the predator of suicide pounces. Kristen
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Until 11:59 p.m. (Central time) on October
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The Athlete: Think of an athlete, coach or other sporting-type person
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qualities about them and then incorporate these qualities into a character in
a story: physical body type, style of walking, usual outfit, reaction under
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Dive into the world
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writing workshop you will tackle the steps to writing a book, learn effective
writing techniques along the way, and of course, begin writing your first
draft.
You'll take an in-depth look at Harper Lee's To Kill A Mockingbird as well as more contemporary novels such as Alice Sebold's The Lovely Bones and Elizabeth Strout's Olive Kitteridge. When you take this workshop, you will learn invaluable tips on writing a book and receive detailed instruction through weekly lessons and writing assignments. In the workshop, you will be able to finish either a decently developed half draft (of half of your novel) or a rough “in-progress" full draft. However, you'll learn all the tools needed to complete the full first draft. At the end of this workshop, you will have accomplished every writer's goal – an “in-progress" working first draft. |
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