Tuesday 9 August 2022

Write Mentor newsletters

 Here are the latest newsletters:


 

Calendar of upcoming events

 

26th August: Instalive with Louise Finch 6pm
5th Sept: Picture Book course with Clare Helen Welsh
13th Sept: WriteRhyme with Catherine Emmett
23-25th Sept: WOWCON (tickets open NOW! Read below for more details)

 

NID Award Update

 

We will send everyone who entered an email this morning - around 8am, either a THANKS FOR ENTERING (which means you haven't been longlisted) or LONGLISTED in the subject line.

On the longlist email we will publish the list of anonymous titles so you can see which entry it is if you submitted more than one.

We will then publicly post the longlist at 5pm on our website and will post a link on Twitter. On the post, we will also list our Adults and Kid Readers favourites (some of which may overlap with the longlist).

Please remember that the award is judged anonymously, so if you're longlisted, do not reveal your title on social media posts.

If longlisted, you need not do anything else - your entries will be read again and once a shortlist is reached, those shortlisted will be passed onto our judge, Chloe Seager. We will announce the SL via email and on our website in a similar manner to how we announce this stage. No further feedback will be provided at subsequent stages of reading, so please don't email to ask for this. Entry standard at this stage is usually high and it's almost always just a subjective taste thing if you don't progress.

We take all these steps to make receiving the news as painless as possible, so we do ask that you don't email us back asking for any additional information or to clarify why you haven't been listed or similar. We hope you'll just appreciate we're not just popping up a blog post with a list of titles.

For those who paid for feedback, this will also arrive on this morning via email. Again, we cannot enter into correspondence about specifics. The kids feedback, as always, is variable in its length and detail, but we've decided not to edit it or try and expand on what they've said. The adult feedback is more detailed and I know our readers spent much time on each entry to clarify what's working and what isn't.

Often our emails go into people's junk/spam folders, so do please check those before emailing us asking where your email is.

I hope this clarifies everything. So today at 8am, about 2 hours after our next newsletter, you'll get your email.

 

Hub Calendar

 

Live sessions:

Thurs 18th Aug: Workshop with Marcus 7pm
Weds 31st August: freelance marketer and publicist Liz Binks 6pm
Weds 14th Sept: Workshop with Rashmi 8pm

This is just a few of the many sessions/opportunities that happen every month in the Hub and are all available on catch-up if you join now.

 

Mentoring

 

WriteMentor Spark is a monthly, online one-to-one mentoring service. Working with a children’s author, you will receive ongoing developmental editing, writing advice, publishing insights, and direct feedback on your manuscript to help you elevate your writing craft to the next level.


Spark Mentoring is always available if you need extra help or support each month.

Alternatively you can join the waiting list for our group mentoring (PB, MG, YA) here.

If you'd like 1-2-1 PB mentoring, complete this form.

 

Magazine

 

 

WriteMentor Magazine Issue 10 out now!

Read…

  • An exclusive interview with Tanya Byrne about writing across different genres and forms.
  • Advice and insights about the process of plotting a children’s novel from Bali Rai.
  • The highs and lows of rewriting your work from Rebecca Barrow.
  • Insights about writing a rhyming picture book from Patricia Cleveland-Peck.
  • Witticisms from our Honest Writer⁠⁠.
  • Winning stories from our flash fiction & short story competitions.
  • Advice from WriteMentor Magazine competition judges Sally Doherty and Emma Finlayson-Palmer about writing flash fiction and short stories.

Buy your copy here!

If you are an up-to-date subscriber, you will have been emailed the latest edition by Florianne.

Catch up on past issues
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WOWCON 2022

 

 

WriteMentor’s 2022 conference is taking place between Friday 23rd and Sunday 24th September. Tickets can be purchased via the WriteMentor website where you can find the full programme.

Agent/Editor 1-2-1s and individual workshops/talks/panels can also now be booked. Please note you must have a ticket for the conference (starting from Basic £12) in order to book the 1-2-1s or sessions.

 

Final Word

 

 

August 2022

I’ve got something different for you today. We’ve talked a lot about mindset and the craft of writing picture books so I thought it’d be nice to slip behind the scenes and chat about the ‘Who’s Who’ when it comes to publishing them…

Editors

These are literal GODS who fall in love with your book and fight for it in acquisitions meetings. They help you sort out your structure and make the words sparkle. They also project-manage the delivery of your book, overseeing everything like a conductor in an orchestra. They’re your main point of contact at the publisher and in many cases, the ones who (together with the art director) pass on your feedback (and grovelly thanks!) to the illustrator. 

Art directors 

They lead the design team. They champion, grow and support artists and help make the pictures shine. They also snoop on portfolios and Instagram hashtags to find the most exciting talent and suggest illustrator pairings. Once your picture book draft has settled down, art directors and their team are usually the ones who create text layouts, showing where and how the text will sit on each page and what kinds of images might work best (e.g. a full-bleed image or vignettes). 

Sales team

They sell your book to retailers in the home market (in our case, the UK) and to export markets (e.g. exporting copies to Australia without actually selling the rights to an Australian publisher). IMPORTANTLY, when your book is headed to an acquisitions meeting, the editor will be shmoozing sales and checking to see how they think the book will do once they crunch the numbers. You need their blessing, people. 

Rights team

Publishers often get ‘world rights’ for picture books. This means that the rights team can sell rights to foreign publishers so that they can then sell (or translate and sell) your book in their territories. Your publisher gets a cut, you and the illustrator get a cut, and it’s an exciting and magical thing to be published around the world in multiple languages, reaching readers you never dreamed of reaching. The rights team make that happen. Part of that is pitching at book fairs like Bologna but rights are sold all year round. 

Production

They run the process of turning those words and pictures into an actual real BOOK and we love them for it though they rarely get shoutouts for what they do. But think of them when you hold your picture book in your hands for the very first time, stroking the cover and marvelling at how it looks and feels! 

Marketing

They work on stuff publishers spend money on. Think Amazon ads, ads in magazines, and POS (point of sale) goodies like bookmarks, postcards, and posters. They’ll work with publicity to come up with a plan to help launch your book. (They’ll usually get the go-ahead to spend a bit more if something good happens to lift sales – e.g. a big award win or the backing of Waterstones – so budget isn’t fixed! It can expand!) 

Publicity (PR)

They can be a huge support and are another big point of contact at the publisher. They’ll come up with clever ideas to promote your book pre- and post-launch. They’ll pitch you to the media for reviews as well as to book festivals and other gigs that could boost your profile and sales. How much support they can give you will vary depending on the context (size of publisher, capacity, strategy for you/your book etc!). 

I’ve gone way over my word limit so will stop here but I hope that’s a useful peek into the people working behind the scenes in traditional publishing.

 

 

Want to learn more from Rashmi?

Rashmi is 2022 Picture Book Writer-in-Residence for the Hub, WriteMentor’s community learning platform that connects like-minded storytellers and provides all the tools they need for writing success.

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Writing can be lonely, but it doesn't need to be.

May the Force be with you!

Stuart, Florianne, Melissa and Emily

 

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Calendar of upcoming events

 

26th August: Instalive with Louise Finch 6pm
5th Sept: Picture Book course with Clare Helen Welsh
13th Sept: WriteRhyme with Catherine Emmett
23-25th Sept: WOWCON (tickets open NOW! Read below for more details)

 

NID Award Update

 

Good news! We have now begin round 2 of reading and we hope we can have a longlist ready to be published NEXT Monday.

We will send everyone who entered an email on Monday morning - around 8am, either a THANKS FOR ENTERING (which means you haven't been longlisted) or LONGLISTED in the subject line.

On the longlist email we will publish the list of anonymous titles so you can see which entry it is if you submitted more than one.

We will then publicly post the longlist at 5pm on our website and will post a link on Twitter.
On the post, we will also list our Adults and Kid Readers favourites (some of which may overlap with the longlist).

If longlisted, you need not do anything else - your entries will be read again and once a shortlist is reached, those shortlisted will be passed onto our judge, Chloe Seager. We will announce the SL via email and on our website in a similar manner to how we announce this stage. No further feedback will be provided at subsequent stages of reading, so please don't email to ask for this. Entry standard at this stage is usually high and it's almost always just a subjective taste thing if you don't progress.

We take all these steps to make receiving the news as painless as possible, so we do ask that you don't email us back asking for any additional information or to clarify why you haven't been listed or similar. We hope you'll just appreciate we're not just popping up a blog post with a list of titles.

For those who paid for feedback, this will also arrive on Monday morning via email. Again, we cannot enter into correspondence about specifics. The kids feedback, as always, is variable in its length and detail, but we've decided not to edit it or try and expand on what they've said. The adult feedback is more detailed and I know our readers spent much time on each entry to clarify what's working and what isn't.

Often our emails go into people's junk/spam folders, so do please check those before emailing us asking where your email is.

I hope this clarifies everything. So next Monday at 8am, about 2 hours after our next newsletter, you'll get your email. We'll also put all this information in next week's newsletter as a reminder.

 

Hub Calendar

 

Live sessions:

Tues 2nd Aug: Book Club reading The Loop by Ben Oliver
Aug 6-7th: Novel Conception Weekend with Melinda Salisbury, Aisha Bushby and Lindsay Galvin
Thurs 18th Aug: Workshop with Marcus 7pm

This is just a few of the many sessions/opportunities that happen every month in the Hub and are all available on catch-up if you join now.

 

Invitation

 

 

If you wish to watch Clare Helen Welsh's double book launch, you can do so via our YouTube channel on Thursday evening.

 

Mentoring

 

WriteMentor Spark is a monthly, online one-to-one mentoring service. Working with a children’s author, you will receive ongoing developmental editing, writing advice, publishing insights, and direct feedback on your manuscript to help you elevate your writing craft to the next level.


Spark Mentoring is always available if you need extra help or support each month.

Alternatively you can join the waiting list for our group mentoring (PB, MG, YA) here.

If you'd like 1-2-1 PB mentoring, complete this form.

 

Magazine

 

WriteMentor Magazine Issue 9 out now!

Buy your copy here!

Catch up on past issues
⬇️

 

 

WOWCON 2022

 

 

WriteMentor’s 2022 conference is taking place between Friday 23rd and Sunday 24th September. Tickets can be purchased via the WriteMentor website where you can find the full programme.

  • Note that all sessions are recorded and available for 30 days after the weekend for ticket holders.
  • If you wish to purchase a bespoke selection of workshops/panels/talks, we suggest that you buy a basic ticket and add the particular sessions (prices below) and see if you might save money with one of the packages. We wanted to put a maximum cap on spending this year (in the past people signing up for many sessions could be paying a lot), so we're introducing these to help save you money in these tough times.
  • If you wish to do an agent 1-2-1, you must purchase a ticket (any of the below) in order to be emailed when they are released.
  • Once we finalise the timetable (just waiting on one or two replies) we will post this so you can manage your timings to attend sessions live.


Packages are as follows:

  • £12 FORCE-SENSITIVE (BASIC) ACCESS: all 6 keynotes and access to interactive community, including Saturday night party. You can add individual sessions (talks/panels/workshop) at a later date.
  • £49 PADAWN (PARTIAL) ACCESSAll keynotes and panels, plus access to interactive community, including Saturday night party. (Save £35)
  • £79 JEDI (MAJORITY) ACCESSAll keynotes, talks and panels, plus access to interactive community, including Saturday night party. (Save £53)
  • £149 JEDI-MASTER (FULL) ACCESSAll 6 keynotes, 6 talks, 6 panels, AND 6 workshops, plus access to interactive community, including Saturday night party. (Save £133)

Individual prices for panels/talks are £12 and workshops are £25, so you can use this to calculate the best plan for you to save the most money.

SPECIAL 20% DISCOUNT ON ALL ACCESS TIERS FOR HUB MEMBERS [EXCLUDING AGENT 1-2-1s]. NOT A MEMBER YET? JOIN NOW.
Agent 1-2-1s (£50) will be released to ticket holders ONLY at a later date (TBC).

 

Final Word

 

 

Find your totem - reader first!

Last week we talked about the need to sometimes be the protagonist in your own story!

To take full autonomy on your author life and drive it in the direction you want it to go in. Often it's called agency when a character does it, and readers like that.

So today we're going to flip the table!

We're going to you LAST and instead focus on our reader. When writing our books, and this is understandable as many use writing as therapy, people write for themselves. They enjoy writing the book, they enjoy making up characters and stories and worlds and it's a big buzz for them.

I love that feeling. But sometimes we can get too lost in our own minds and we go in a direction with the story that is powerfully therapeutic for us, personally, but maybe not for our reader.

For example, I recently finished a book which involved a boy who lived in a household of abuse, sleeping behind a curtain at the back of the kitchen, on a stinking, greasy mattress and who's live is horrific in many other ways. I won't scar you with the details, but it's based on experience.

Anyway, when I sought advice on this from agents, I was told to make the home life happier. To make the abuse either go away or certainly dulled down.

Now I was very conflicted about this - on one hand, it was a realistic account of what happens for many children. Do they not deserve to see a character who is in the same circumstances as them, horrible circumstances, but then see them escape that life and grow in the book towards happiness and some degree of peace.

I thought that was a powerful message and one that young me would have loved. I was told no, that it wouldn't be published like that. Publishers want upbeat stories and it was too heavy for MG.

My disappointment was immense. I ended up dulling the scenes a little - took out the firsthand scenes and just inferred the abusive home life.

But I've spent so much time since wondering if I'd done the right thing - did I make that change to serve my reader first or to get published? Did I abandon my own creative vision for the novel, based upon real experience, to get past a gatekeeper or for the reader, a 10 year old kid. 

This is what I, personally, find so hard in writing for kids. We write for them, they should come first, and it can be hard to get out of our own way and remember that at times when we write, because we also write for ourselves. Secondary to that is we're being told what a 10-year-old boy wants by a series of adults, from agent to editor to sales, none of whom interact with the end buyer. So, are they always right? They must also go through this cycle of self-doubt and I don't for one second think their judgement is wrong. Or certainly not a lot of the time.

But, to bring it back to the main point of this - when we veer too far into ourselves when writing, and forget about the kid (or the gatekeepers - jeez it can be hard to remember who we're writing for! But yes, it is the kids, and never forget that!), we need to get ourselves back into that mindset - reader first.

So how do we do this?

There's obviously many ways but one that I like is the idea of a totem. A physical symbol of your books DNA - what's at its heart. (Borrowing this idea from Inception, where they use something physical to confirm their reality when they dive too deep away from it - great movie, watch it if you haven't!)

I was chatting to Emma Read about this last week, after she was reading one of my stories, and she said to write down the 3 things that kids will be coming to my books for? And it got me thinking about this. A lot.

And I came up with my own questions which I keep recycling:

- What promise have you made to the reader with your cover and opening? 
- What do kids who typically read books like yours want? (For my genre of MG, it's humour, adventure, and wonder).

And so I wrote down the 3 words that Emma suggested. Mars. Swords. Ghosts.
I wrote down what my opening and cover will promise. I wrote down the 3 things for my genre of MG. And I stuck the post-it on my screen. That's my totem.

So now when I'm editing/rewriting this draft that's at the forefront of my mind. It was a great tip. 

And your totem doesn't need to be a post-it, it can be anything at all - a picture of your kids, or a stock image of kids reading books, or even kids reviews on books (if you go to amazon there's a plethora).

It's a good way to keep on track and remind you that you're not the hero in your novel, your wants and needs don't come first, it's over to your readers.

Reader first.

 

 

You can read more final words from Stuart via his own monthly newsletter here.

And you can buy our collection of 33 Final Words on e-book to uplift and inspire you here.

If you've already bought Final Word, we always appreciate a review - you could be our first reviewer!
🙌

 

Writing can be lonely, but it doesn't need to be.

May the Force be with you!

Stuart, Florianne, Melissa and Emily

 


 

Calendar of upcoming events

 

26th August: Instalive with Louise Finch 6pm
5th Sept: Picture Book course with Clare Helen Welsh
13th Sept: WriteRhyme with Catherine Emmett
23-25th Sept: WOWCON (tickets open NOW! Read below for more details)

 

NID Award Update

 

There will be no announcements this week. We are about 99% through the kids reads (adults all done) for round 1. We will have too many going into round 2 for a long list, so this will involve another round of reading, which will take place once the kids are finished. We do apologise again for the wait but it is outwith our control.
Hopefully we'll have something more to tell you next week.

 

Hub Calendar

 

Live sessions:

Tues 26th July: Ness Wood, award-winning picture book, fiction designer and art director 6pm
Weds 27th July: Workshop with Rashmi 8pm
Tues 2nd Aug: Book Club reading The Loop by Ben Oliver
Aug 6-7th: Novel Conception Weekend with Melinda Salisbury, Aisha Bushby and Lindsay Galvin
Thurs 18th Aug: Workshop with Marcus 7pm
Weds 31st Aug: Workshop with Rashmi 8pm

This is just a few of the many sessions/opportunities that happen every month in the Hub and are all available on catch-up if you join now.

 

Mentoring

 

WriteMentor Spark is a monthly, online one-to-one mentoring service. Working with a children’s author, you will receive ongoing developmental editing, writing advice, publishing insights, and direct feedback on your manuscript to help you elevate your writing craft to the next level.


Spark Mentoring is always available if you need extra help or support each month.

Alternatively you can join the waiting list for our group mentoring (PB, MG, YA) here.

If you'd like 1-2-1 PB mentoring, complete this form.

 

Magazine

 

WriteMentor Magazine Issue 9 out now!

Buy your copy here!

Catch up on past issues
⬇️

 

 

Short Story/Flash Winners

 

 

WRITEMENTOR MAGAZINE COMPETITION WINNERS

Short story: All the Time in the World by Iqbal Hussain

Flash fiction: Two Scoops and a Cone by Binti Kasilingam


Congratulations to the winners & thank you everyone who shared their stories with us, it's always a privilege to read them! You can read the winners stories in the next edition of the WM magazine.

As always, thanks to our judges, Emma and Sally. Sadly, it's Sally's last time judging the Flash, but we have a new judge in place for next time. 

Sally, thanks for being such a wonderful judge these last 2 years!

 

Podcast

 

We've got not one, but THREE podcast series for your ears to enjoy! All free-to-access, so grab a cup of tea and settle down to some writing & publishing insights. Our Podcast page is here. If you prefer watching, or would like closed captions, you can go to our YouTube channel. Latest episode: This Writing Life: Ep5 Controversial Writing Opinions

 

WOWCON 2022

 

 

WriteMentor’s 2022 conference is taking place between Friday 23rd and Sunday 24th September. Tickets can be purchased via the WriteMentor website where you can find the full programme.

  • Note that all sessions are recorded and available for 30 days after the weekend for ticket holders.
  • If you wish to purchase a bespoke selection of workshops/panels/talks, we suggest that you buy a basic ticket and add the particular sessions (prices below) and see if you might save money with one of the packages. We wanted to put a maximum cap on spending this year (in the past people signing up for many sessions could be paying a lot), so we're introducing these to help save you money in these tough times.
  • If you wish to do an agent 1-2-1, you must purchase a ticket (any of the below) in order to be emailed when they are released.
  • Once we finalise the timetable (just waiting on one or two replies) we will post this so you can manage your timings to attend sessions live.


Packages are as follows:

  • £12 FORCE-SENSITIVE (BASIC) ACCESS: all 6 keynotes and access to interactive community, including Saturday night party. You can add individual sessions (talks/panels/workshop) at a later date.
  • £49 PADAWN (PARTIAL) ACCESSAll keynotes and panels, plus access to interactive community, including Saturday night party. (Save £35)
  • £79 JEDI (MAJORITY) ACCESSAll keynotes, talks and panels, plus access to interactive community, including Saturday night party. (Save £53)
  • £149 JEDI-MASTER (FULL) ACCESSAll 6 keynotes, 6 talks, 6 panels, AND 6 workshops, plus access to interactive community, including Saturday night party. (Save £133)

Individual prices for panels/talks are £12 and workshops are £25, so you can use this to calculate the best plan for you to save the most money.

SPECIAL 20% DISCOUNT ON ALL ACCESS TIERS FOR HUB MEMBERS [EXCLUDING AGENT 1-2-1s]. NOT A MEMBER YET? JOIN NOW.
Agent 1-2-1s (£50) will be released to ticket holders ONLY at a later date (TBC).

 

Final Word

 

 

Yes, you know what GIF usually means at the start of a newsletter! You are stuck with me, Stuart, again this week!

2 out of 4 newsletters a month come from our award-winning Writer's In Residence. They are packed with insight, wisdom and knowledge of their traditionally published author lives. They are an absolute joy to read and they fill my creative well every time. I adore them.

But traditional publishing for many people reading this newsletter simply won't happen.

There's a line peddled on social media that 'as long as you never give up, you'll get published.' It is meant with a good heart and to encourage writers. It is false.

Simply wanting something badly or continuing to try and or not giving up, etc, is not enough to produce a story that will get you a traditional publishing deal. Fact.

There are simply too many (good) writers out there (and poor ones, too) for this to be true. And while I am not a negative person, nor do I wish to burst the bubbles of those who say these things, or those who believe it, we have to also be realistic about things.

For every 1 writer who does the 'I kept going and now look at me, I'm a published author' there are a 100 (or even 1000) writers who also NEVER GAVE UP, they have equal if not more resilience and persistence, but still don't have the deal.

Tradition publishing is not for everyone. Nor, even, should we want it to be.

I have spoken with many author friends in the last couple of months and heard appalling things about how they've been treated by publishers in the last year or two. Many of them you'd look at on social media and think - wow, they're doing so well, etc - but the reality is that their publication dates have been pushed, and they don't get their last advance instalment and are struggling financially, or worse still, they are writing out of contract, or simply struggling to sell their latest work.

Words like 'brutal', 'chaos', 'lack of communication', 'forgotten', 'no publicity' are amongst the things I hear most often.

Traditional publishing seems like the fairytale for most of us. The little daydreams of signing a deal and launching a book and attending festivals with kids and winning literary awards are what keep many of us going.

That happens for a tiny percentage of authors. We hear about those authors, but those who are struggling, tend to remain quieter. They maybe got the big deal but then their books didn't hit the shelves or fly off them like they hoped. They maybe sold well, but not quite enough for the publisher, and they don't have their next book taken on by that publisher, or indeed any publisher. They have to start from scratch, only (and many authors have told me this) it's even harder when you're not a debut.

Sorry, that all sounds a bit grim, but I wanted to be a bit more real with you today. And here's why.

Traditional publishing is not your only option.

To be fair, it hasn't been for a while, but even more so now than ever, there's a different path to walk.

Indie publishing. 

I wanted to talk about some people, who I know read this newsletter, who have started to pave a way of hope and autonomy in these more difficult times. 

People like Sally Doherty (who wrote this great blog post for us) or Emma Bradley (who wrote this piece), or even more prolifically, Marisa Noelle, who did an hour long video on self-publishing for WM.

And many more out there, too, who are in our community and have taken the bold move to get their books directly into the hands of readers.

Full autonomy, control editorial vision, professionally produced with the aid of editors, illustrators, cover designers and anything else you could ask for from a traditional publisher, in terms of the book production. In fact, many trad publishers use the same freelancers that self-published authors use.

There's been a long time snobbery about this route - and I have seen evidence as to why people may see self-publishing as inferior, as there is a lot of poorly produced and edited books out there - but times and attitudes are changing.

Our world is changing and evolving - I watched a panel discussion at a conference this week where two writers started self-publishing their books in 2019 and are already number 1 bestsellers on Amazon, have written and published 50 books, have a tv series based on their book series coming soon and have done all of this themselves, all via their own determination to write the stuff their readers want and get it into their hands. They have used TikTok amongst other things, like advertising, to sell over 5 million copies of their books in just under 3 years.

Not everyone will be like them, or self-published bestsellers like Andy Weir, or EL James, or LJ Ross, or indeed the authors I mentioned above of the Zodiac Academy series, and make it big, in the same way so few make it with traditional publishing.

And it's worth mentioning that self-publishing has many, many cons, too. It's not all sweetness and light - it's a hard grind, like running a full-time business on top of the writing and not to be entered into lightly. Read the articles/videos above - follow other self-published authors - see how they're doing it, if it interests you.

But I just wanted to use this space today to open your eyes a little wider, to see beyond the confines of a very old, slow-to-evolve, and narrow industry to a much wider, dynamic, and quickly changing landscape beyond.

Remember YOU are the HERO of your own story! You are not passive, you do not have to wait for adventure to arrive on your door step - we write about active character who chase what they want and overcome obstacles and grow.

Focus on that this week - next week we'll talk about when you're not the hero of your own story!

Have a great writing week everyone!

 

 

You can read more final words from Stuart via his own monthly newsletter here.

And you can buy our collection of 33 Final Words on e-book to uplift and inspire you here.

If you've already bought Final Word, we always appreciate a review - you could be our first reviewer!
🙌

 

Writing can be lonely, but it doesn't need to be.

May the Force be with you!

Stuart, Florianne, Melissa and Emily

 


 

Calendar of upcoming events

 

5th Sept: Picture Book course with Clare Helen Welsh
13th Sept: WriteRhyme with Catherine Emmett
23-25th Sept: WOWCON (tickets open NOW! Read below for more details)

 

NID Award Update

 

There will be no announcements this week. We are about 95% through the kids reads (adults all done) for round 1. We will have too many going into round 2 for a long list, so this will involve another round of reading, which will take place once the kids are finished. We do apologise again for the wait but it is outwith our control.
Hopefully we'll have something to tell you next week.

 

Hub Calendar

 

Live sessions:

Mon 18th July: Closing date for PitchHero judged by Rachel Petty
Thurs 21st July: Workshop with Marcus 7pm
Tues 26th July: Ness Wood, award-winning picture book, fiction designer and art director 6pm
Weds 27th July: Workshop with Rashmi 8pm
Aug 6-7th: Novel Conception Weekend

This is just a few of the many sessions/opportunities that happen every month in the Hub and are all available on catch-up if you join now.

 

Hub member post:
The power of the beta reader

 

Kristina Wilson-Brown shares how becoming part of a critique group via the WriteMentor Hub reignited her motivation after a writing slump and helped her connect with fellow storytellers 

“Find yourself a critique group” – that’s what they told me. 

So, I did.

I didn’t stop at one group. Oh no, I gathered them up like an excitable kid at a Pick ‘n Mix counter. I put out requests to join groups through the fabulous world of the online writing community, and before I knew it, I was a member of one PB and two MG groups.

Month by month, I was receiving invaluable feedback from my peers on stories I was working on, and at the same time, improving my own skills in the mystical art of providing feedback to others. 

These groups have been a lifeline through the rocky road of writing, and if it wasn’t for these wonderfully supportive humans, I am certain I would have given up.

My problem is, I’m impatient.

This is an unfortunate characteristic for an aspiring author to have. However, I’m in my mid-forties, so the chances of shaking off this trait now are slim-to-none. 

Instead, I must find ways to adapt my impatient instincts if I’m to stand a chance of making it in an industry renowned for moving at a glacial pace.

So far, I have come up with the following action points to tame my twitchy nature:

  • Make sure I work on more than one project at a time
  • Always start something new when querying
  • Set myself new challenges
  • Enter competitions

It was this last action point which led me to the power of the beta reader.

Anticipation and dread

The moment had come; a moment which fills all aspiring writers with both anticipation and dread: 

The announcement of ‘The List’.

‘The List’ can apply to any writing competition. Writers everywhere feverishly flick between social media platforms with one hand, and refreshing their inboxes with the other, desperate to see their name or book title pop up. 

This was me a few weeks back, waiting for the announcement of the WriteMentor Summer Programme mentee pairings list.

The designated time had arrived – THE email was due. An email, thoughtfully prepared by the team at WriteMentor, which would have one of two subject titles – one which would make you celebrate, and one which would make you sigh. 

Writers then had the time to let either news settle privately before the official announcement hit the masses later that day. This added layer of consideration illustrates the kind of good souls who run this programme.

The email arrived. The butterflies in my stomach lifted off when I saw the ‘WriteMentor’ name appear. Then, the butterflies quickly landed and remained still when I scanned across to the subject title. 

Sigh.

Taking charge 

By this point, I had entered a few writing competitions, so had been used to this feeling. The sting never goes away, but for me, it doesn’t last for as long as it used to.

This list did have a glimmer of joy for me, when I saw one of my critique partners titles pop up. It may sound corny, but it’s true. A win for someone in your writing team, feels like a win for you too.

Of course, I had the obligatory period of self-pity and wallowing. Surely standard practice for any writer? 

But then, I snapped myself out of my slump and took charge of the situation.

Read the rest here.

 

Mentoring

 

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Spark Mentoring is always available if you need extra help or support each month.

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WOWCON 2022

 

 

WriteMentor’s 2022 conference is taking place between Friday 23rd and Sunday 24th September. Tickets can be purchased via the WriteMentor website where you can find the full programme.

  • Note that all sessions are recorded and available for 30 days after the weekend for ticket holders.
  • If you wish to purchase a bespoke selection of workshops/panels/talks, we suggest that you buy a basic ticket and add the particular sessions (prices below) and see if you might save money with one of the packages. We wanted to put a maximum cap on spending this year (in the past people signing up for many sessions could be paying a lot), so we're introducing these to help save you money in these tough times.
  • If you wish to do an agent 1-2-1, you must purchase a ticket (any of the below) in order to be emailed when they are released.
  • Once we finalise the timetable (just waiting on one or two replies) we will post this so you can manage your timings to attend sessions live.


Packages are as follows:

  • £12 FORCE-SENSITIVE (BASIC) ACCESS: all 6 keynotes and access to interactive community, including Saturday night party. You can add individual sessions (talks/panels/workshop) at a later date.
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Individual prices for panels/talks are £12 and workshops are £25, so you can use this to calculate the best plan for you to save the most money.

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Final Word

 

 

July 2022

It is raining. A lot. This is not what I signed up for when moving to the south of France, but before I go to my local mairie and ask for a refund, I suppose I should just take it all on board, life and its expectations blah blah, accept whatever comes eyeroll eyeroll, and put up with it. And truly, the garden needs the water, and I’m not really complaining, I just wish I could find a builder to return my calls as my roof needs fixing, and I don’t want it to rain on guests for my writing retreat while they are asleep. That would be less than ideal.

Some things are unpredictable. Other things…well, I really ought to know better. I learned long ago (and apparently had forgotten) that I should not start to write a book until I have at least three quarters of the sense that I am ready to write it. This is just the way I work, and it usually doesn’t let me down. But…

This morning, I finished what was for me quite a hefty rewrite on a short book. There were some quite major structural things to do, involving deleting certain threads, sneaking in new ones, moving others, changing the timeline, and all the extraneous fall out from that kind of work. I know why this happened: I did not feel I was really ready to start writing. I mean, we never do entirely, but I have my own personal instinctive benchmark for the moment when it might be okay to begin. And on this occasion, with a deadline pressing, and the thought that it was ‘only’ a short book, I began anyway.

The result was a bit of a mess of a first draft and hence the rewriting required. I’ve done what I think is needed now, and I fully see that this second draft is much better (in my opinion) than the first – things are clearer and stronger, but I can’t shift the belief that I would have got to this in a first draft had I not broken my rule of not writing without enough of an idea what I’m doing.

As I’ve said before, many, many times, there is no one way to be a writer. That applies even to yourself, not just to all writers – you can change and adapt and be many different types of writer with each thing you work on. And here we are, I hope I now have a second draft my editor likes better, but there is never any guarantee that rewrites will improve matters, if what you have to start with is too much of a dog’s dinner. And how much more risky it is to hope that what you might later need to do to change things fits with what you already have. It’s that or write a whole new book. So I got away with it this time, but it’s reminded me that before I start the next book, later this year – which is a three year project of much greater extent – that I really must make sure I know, more or less, what I am doing, because I do not want to have to repeat an exercise like this on a long book. I see this process of waiting for the right moment to begin writing as like a game of chicken. I know I must hold out until that right moment, even if a deadline is hurrying towards me. But then, one must remember what Terry Pratchett said about deadlines: “I love the sound they make as they fly past.”

The rain has stopped, unexpectedly. The sky is clearing and becoming blue again. I can see clearly for a little while, at least. So time to put off writing for a little while longer, and make the most of it.

 

 

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Author Marcus Sedgwick is 2022 Novel Writer-in-Residence for the Hub, WriteMentor’s community learning platform that connects like-minded storytellers and provides all the tools they need for writing success.

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