Monday 27 February 2012

HOW TO WRITE A CHILDREN'S PICTURE BOOK COMPETITION

The deadline for this competition is looming (5 March), the details of which can be found in the January edition of Writing Magazine and I have finally edited my short story about bedtime down to below 250 words.  I will be sending this off in the post tomorrow - fingers crossed for me.

Here it is:



NO BEAR FOR BEDTIME


I won’t go to bed and I don’t care 
I won’t go without my bear


Mummy’s looked in my bed and Daddy looked in the pram

They only found my Lolly lamb



They looked in the kitchen and behind the door 
But he’s not under the table or on the floor



Daddy’s looked in the front room but couldn’t find 
Him under the cushions or behind the blind



I won’t go to bed and I don’t care
I won’t go without my bear



My brother checked the cat and then the dog 
But they only had my squeaky frog



He looked under my covers and under my bed
He’s not there, I already said



Mummy looked in the playroom amongst the toys 
When I began to make some noise



I won’t go to bed and I don’t care 
I won’t go without my bear



They say he’s not in the house, in any rooms
A sleepless night before them looms



Daddy says he’ll check the car and the garden shed 
Because he really wants me to go to bed



I won’t go to bed and I don’t care 
I won’t go without my bear



While in the garden he calls to Mum 
I break into a smile and begin to run



For there he is on the washing line 
Hanging by his ears for all that time



I will go to bed and I really care 
That I can cuddle Benjy bear

1 comment:

  1. That's great Karen! I'm sure that R. would love it as a bedtime story - or at any other time for that matter! And I could clearly picture the illustrations for each line as I was reading it :o) x

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