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How to work with an editor

Getting professional feedback on your work

Nothing has improved my writing more than working with a professional editor. This newsletter highlights the help available to you right now and what to do with that all-important feedback once you get it.
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EDITORIAL: Manuscript Assessments
Did you know we work with some of the leading editors in the world? We’ll hand-match you with commissioning editors; ex-agents; acclaimed authors and tutors who will read your full manuscript and give you a detailed report on how to take your writing to the next level. We’re always blown away with just how career-changing this can be!




Spotlight


ORION UNCUT: Commissioning editors explained (FREE for members)
We interview ‘Big 5’ Commissioning Editor Francesca Pathak to find out how editors work with authors after they land a publishing deal. It’s eye-opening stuff!

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BLOG: How to choose a literary consultant
How do you choose the best editor to work with? This blog reveals the different kinds of editors available and how to choose the best one for your work.

EDITORIAL: Welcome to our new editors!
We’ve just added four new editors to our list: Ultimate Novel Writing Course tutor Wes Brown; Australia-based Liz Monument; US industry wiz Alma Alexander; and creative writing teacher Natasha Bell.



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How to use feedback from a professional

It wasn’t until I landed a literary agent that I ever worked on full-manuscript feedback from a professional. And let me tell you – it was a bit of a revelation.
By that time, I’d written and self-edited four novels and I thought I’d got the process down. But professional feedback doesn’t just open your eyes to the stuff you’re doing wrong in one book – it shows you how you can avoid making the same mistakes in every single thing you write from then on. It helps you understand your voice; refine your storytelling and look objectively at your story as a machine that needs all parts to shine in order to work.
Because this feedback is from a ‘professional’, it’s tempting to take their word as gospel and make changes to the letter. Many writers end up getting stuck if they do this. Sure – there are some suggestions you’ll read that will make perfect sense to you. But others you might not be so sure about.
No editor wants you to make changes that don’t feel right to you. Instead, take their feedback as proof that something in your work isn’t working and try to nail down what that is. Do you just need to be clearer? Is there another change you could make that would fix the issue, without unravelling the rest of the story you’re trying to tell?
Once you’ve found the right way to work with a professional, editing becomes a fantastic learning experience. Have you worked with an editor before? How did you find the process? Sign up for free and share in the Townhouse here.

As always, happy writing and remember, you can contact our customer service team on +44 (0) 345 459 9560* or info@jerichowriters.com for any writing-related advice.
Stay well x
Sarah J
Author | Jericho Writers
*or if you're in the US, give us a call toll free on +1 (646)-974-9060



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Our second published book has just landed. Grab your copy of Harry Bingham’s “love letters to writers” featuring advice from his 20+ years in the business.
Under-represented writers are invited to apply for a free place on September’s Self-Edit Your Novel tutored course, with one-in-four alumni now published. Closes 31 August.
Join 1,000 writers from all seven continents around the world for just a fraction of the price, with our discount latecomer tickets now available.




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The empty cover


Oh ye merry folk of writing, I have tidings to bring … but, in the best traditions of suspense, I’m not going to tell you just yet.
Instead, a question:
Suppose you were told that your book cover wasn’t allowed to centre on an image of any kind? Fine, perhaps you might be allowed a doodle, or watermark, or something clearly secondary to the actual text – but mostly, you’d be allowed words, colours and nothing much else.
How would you feel?
I think most of us would feel disappointed. Text feels a good way to communicate data, but a lacklustre way of communicating emotion. And, since novels are mostly about an emotional journey, a text-only cover seems certain to disappoint.
And, OK, all my fiction covers use imagery of some sort. At times, that imagery has been very scanty indeed. The American cover of This Thing of Darkness features a cloud. That’s literally all. The US version of Love Story, with Murders features a tree in a snowy landscape and, again, nothing else. (The tree, by the way, plays no part in the story. It just looked nice.)
But what you have to remember about really good cover designers is that they’re really good designers. They’re creatives. You have to tell them the outcome you want – roughly, “This is the genre, here is the emotion I want to generate, and here are some visual ingredients that may or may not be useful.”
So when I talked to my cover designer about the Thing of Darkness cover, the basic mission statement could have been reduced to:
· Crime thriller
· Excitement / danger
· Trawler / storm / waves
I assumed we’d have some shot of a trawler deck, tipped at some terrifying angle, with black water sluicing across the deck. Throw a crimey-title in a crimey-font across the image and – badda-boom – there’s your cover.
And sure. I’ll bet you a dollar to a dime that my designer explored covers like that. Dug out pictures of trawlers (from massive image libraries that have got shots of absolutely everything.) But in the end, a designer has to be guided by what works.
Try trawler. Does it work? Dammit. Not quite. Explore lighthouse. Does that work? Dammit. Not quite. Try waves-smashing-on-rocks. Does that work? Dammit. Not quite.
A creatively-led and experimental design process ended up with a cover – the storm cloud – that we hadn’t anticipated, but worked just great.
That cover, however, walked only halfway to pure abstraction; it didn’t go the whole hog. Jonathan Safran Foer’s Everything Is Illuminated, on the other hand, used text. And colour. And nothing else. Go take a look at it.
Ask yourself honestly: would this cover have been better with imagery? And what would the images have been? The book tells a heart-rending story of the Jewish experience of Ukraine – and of the Second World War. You could have had some sepia-tinted photos of some long-ago shtetl. But those images would have been reductive. They’d have limited the book instead of hugely expanding it.
And ask yourself. What do you feel when you see the Everything is Illuminated cover? The black and white looks sober, but the billowing colour keeps telling you: yes, there is illumination, it is joyous, and it is magical, and this book will open those doors.
Or look at this version of Ian Fleming’s The Spy Who Loved Me. It’s utterly simple. The title already sells the book. The font and colours hint at the book’s classic status. And the two singed bullet holes: they give you all the promise you need to pick the book up and starting reading. More would have given less.
I make these points because, oh merry folk of writing, I have news. And the news is:
I’ve written a book! And it’s just been published!
And not to beat about the bush too much:
You know what the book is – because you’ve already read it!
The book is called 52 LETTERS and it’s a compilation of these weekly emails from me to you – but squidged into book form, drained of any residual marketing nonsense, and tied with a ribbon woven from rainbow beams and unicorn kisses.
Now, I have to say, I love writing these weekly emails and I loved-loved-loved squidging them together into a book. An email, inevitably, a bit of a throwaway thing. Even if you read one and it really hits a spot, the likelihood is that you absorb some of the message, then move on. Forget it.
A book just has more status than that. In the world, yes, but also mentally. Anything tucked up in a book is asking to be stored in a different way – read differently, absorbed differently.
So though I remembered writing all those emails, the actual book feels like a different thing. Different and better. I love it already.
But – gulp – to remove my (sober, black felt) writing hat and put on my (jaunty, yellow) marketing one: how the hell do you sell a book like that?
I mean: it’s not a book about writing, or editing, or publishing, or marketing. It’s a little bit of all those things, plus a big fat helping of whatever nonsense is in my brain at the time.
And what kind of image do you put on the cover to say: “here’s quite a general, discursive yet practical and entertaining book for writers?”
A pen? A typewriter? A quill? An inkpot?
If you browse the Authorship category on Amazon, you’ll find books that make use of all of those icons … even though damn few of us actually use a pen, or typewriter or inkpot to write with. They’re icons used by non-creative visual folks as a kind of angry shorthand: “You know that inkpot symbolises things-for-writers, so here’s a book with yet another damn inkpot on it. Now buy it, OK?”
So. What did we do, me and my numberless colleagues at Jericho Writers Publishing?
Well, the title we came up with – in the form it appears on Amazon – is:
52 Letters: A year of advice on writing, editing, getting an agent, writing from the heart...
But the actual cover delivers a much longer title / subtitle combo:
52 Letters: A year of advice on writing, editing, getting an agent, writing from the heart, the world’s oldest book, marketing your work, battling copyeditors, the secret of style, probable vs plausible, what’s up with Barnes & Noble, cannibalism, empathetic characters, writing phonetically and much more.
We liked that title because it told you what a rich, glorious, unembarrassed mish-mash the book contains. It feels like, at a textual level, a title that delivers the promise of the book.
But in a way, by choosing such a massively convoluted title, we were giving our designer an even bigger problem than he might have had to begin with. Not only was the book hard to pigeonhole, but we’ve given him a title so long that it wouldn’t even fit on Amazon’s title box.
But you know what? That wasn’t our problem. It was the designer’s. The sort of problem he loves to solve.
We just threw a book description and our enormous title at our designer, Kelly Finnegan, and said, , “Hey Kelly, here’s a ridiculously long title for a hard-to-categorise book. The book is about writing and editing and all that, but it’s definitely not a textbook. We think it’s useful but entertaining, practical but discursive. And also – well, hell, we want it to be joyous and inspirational and anarchic and personal and fun. So please can we have a book cover that says all that – and looks incredible? Thanks.
I had no idea what Kelly would come back with, but he came back to us with this:
And honestly? I think that may be the best book cover I’ve ever had. Any country, any title, any edition.
The fact is that, although Kelly’s used just three main colours, a watermark version of me, and the text, the result delivers exactly the message we wanted.
What’s striking is just how much creativity there is in the design.
We didn’t tell Kelly to make the actual book title (“52 Letters”) small; he just did it. We didn’t tell Kelly to put in the “Love from” before my author name; he just did it. And we certainly didn’t tell him to use that sprawling handwritten font for the subtitle, but his decision to do that immediately signified something personal, creative and fun.
We sent some advance review copies out to people and got lots of lovely comments back, including this doozy from John David Mann:
“Not since Stephen King’s “On Writing” have I so valued a writer’s writing on writing! These aren’t just 52 Letters—they’re 52 love letters, to and for writers of all stripes and stages of accomplishment.”
Now that’s a lovely quote, of course. (Thanks, John!) But that ‘love letter’ comment feels absolutely consistent with the cover Kelly created. And when you have that kind of merger between what the cover promises to a reader and what it ends up delivering, you have a kind of sweet perfection – and one not of my making.
Lovely.
And finally, my little pickled pumpkin, because you are one of the people to whom I have addressed all these letters, we have made the book available at a small fraction of its normal price. The paperback ($8.99 / £6.99) is just about as cheap as we’re permitted to price it: we literally earn almost nothing at that price. The ebook too ($2.99 / £1.99 / or free via KU) is priced to be more like a giveaway than an actual purchase.
So, please: I hope you pick up a copy, because it was written, quite literally, for you – and because you helped create it.
The fact is, that if you lot weren’t such a totally brilliant audience, I’d never have written as many emails as I have done, and they’d have been a lot more boring too. You guys are the best.
And please, buy it fast, because when the clock strikes midnight on Saturday, we shall ratchet those prices up higher than a stilt-walking giraffe on a stepladder.
I think Kelly Finnegan is a wee bit of a genius. And best of all? No inkpots.
Till soon.
Harry

PS: Townhouse has been demolished by accident – the local council wanted to build a bypass, then found they were holding the map upside down. Oh well.
You can find this post (with pictures and quite a lot of builders’ rubble) here: https://community.jerichowriters.com/page/view-post?id=181
Want to write secret messages about something else? Then hit reply.
PPS: Hate writing? Developing the world’s longest title for a book about pickling pumpkins? Then unsubscribe. You and I shall ne’er be friends.
PPPS: It sounds more evil to say ne’er don’t you think? I shall cackle as I say it.
PPPPS: Stop reading this email. Do something valuable with your life. You could always buy this excellent book.



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Compelling beginnings and reader-happy endings

The start and end of your story are perhaps the two most crucial elements. At the beginning, you need to draw a reader into your world and have them wanting to read more. And at the end, you want to leave them feeling satisfied that everything was wrapped-up. So – have I piqued your interest enough for you to read on? Then let us begin...
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COURSE: Ultimate Novel Writing Course 2020-21
Places on this MA-style course are fast booking up. Start in October with an idea and finish in September 2021 with an edited manuscript. Apply soon – limited places remaining.




NEW on Jericho Writers


MASTERCLASS: Irresistible Beginnings and Happy Endings (FREE for members)
Join bestselling author Cathy Bramley as she reveals the components of a beginning that captures attention, and an ending that leaves readers satisfied. Featuring special agent guest, Hayley Steed.

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BLOG: The Four Fundamentals of Clarity in Writing
Clarity is key in getting our point across as writers. In this new article, guest author Hayley Milliman takes us through four ways to improve the clarity of your writing.

WEBINAR: How to use out-of-copyright works to inspire ideas (FREE for members)
19 August 2020. The final webinar in Melissa Addey’s ‘Getting New Ideas’ series explores how to utilise old works to create something new.



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How not to start a book

Last week, I wrote about some of the patterns I spot in the submissions I read. This week is a continuation from that, but about the top five ways I see books starting. It's not necessarily that these are wrong, but when you’re reading a stack of submissions, these beginnings get old, fast.
1: BOOM! Something awful has happened in the first paragraph. Oh my, how dramatic, how—oh no wait – it turns out that dramatic thing was all a ploy to get me interested. It was a false alarm – a misunderstanding. (The advice for starting a story is to have something happen – but make this relevant to your story.)
2: We are eating breakfast/lunch/dinner at a kitchen table. (So many start with this!)
3: We are waking up. (Same as above.)
4: BOOM! Someone is DEAD! They die right here on the first page and there is a lot of crying / shaking / screaming. Only I don’t care enough about the characters yet, so I’m left a little cold. (I start books with dead people too. It can make a good beginning, just tone down the dramatics on the first page, or move the death to the end of the chapter, after some tension-building.)
5: The narrator tells you that if only they knew what was to come, they never would have [said yes / left the house / cleaned the carpet – whatever]. (Some agents actively hate the phrase “little did they know”.)
**Disclaimer** - If you see your beginning on this list, don’t worry too much. There are no rules to say you can’t use these, and I’ve seen examples from all five work well! If you do think something might not be working with your opening though, I hope these help get to the bottom of it.
What are the patterns you spot in the openings to books? Are there any tropes in published books that turn you off? Sign up for free and share your thoughts in the Townhouse, here.
Sarah J x

As always, happy writing and remember, you can contact our customer service team on +44 (0) 345 459 9560* or info@jerichowriters.com for any writing-related advice.
Stay well x
Sarah J
Author | Jericho Writers
*or if you're in the US, give us a call toll free on +1 (646)-974-9060



Plus – don’t miss:

Manuscript Assessment (Discounts available for members)
Our most popular editorial service matches you to your dream editor and gives you tailored feedback on your work. It doesn’t get better than that.
Under-represented writers are invited to apply for a free place on September’s Self-Edit Your Novel tutored course, with one-in-four alumni now published. Closes 31 August.
Summer Festival Latecomer tickets (Discounts available for members)
Join 1,000 writers from all seven continents around the world for up to a third off, with our discount latecomer tickets now available.




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Which course do I choose?

A guide to Jericho Writers' courses and services
Hi,
You’ve probably seen that we at Jericho Writers offer a whole lot of stuff – from webinars, to courses and editorial.
We want to create options for writers who need support with their writing at all stages of their careers – and at all price-points too. Here’s your quick guide to what we offer, and what’s available to you, right now.



For writers with a novel idea, or a draft-in-progress


Ultimate Novel Writing

OPTION 1: The Ultimate Novel Writing Course

This year-long super course takes writers with a cracking idea and gives them as much support, tutorials, opportunities and mentoring as we can possibly give them, all wrapped into one. Includes mentoring, a full-manuscript assessment, multiple events and a lifetime membership. The 2020/2021 course is now open for applications and there are limited places available, so if you're interested you'll need to act fast!
FOR: Writers who are serious about writing a novel and getting it published.
PRICE: $$$$ - This is an expensive option, but offers unparalleled value.


OPTION 2: Complete Novel Mentoring

Get one-to-one advice and feedback from world-leading mentors as you write your book. This option includes 20 hours of flexible mentoring, entirely flexible to your needs.
FOR: Writers who like the idea of one-to-one expert feedback on their work as they write, but can’t afford a premium course.
PRICE: $$$ - A great option for those who’d love one-to-one help.

OPTION 3: Opening Section Review

Get feedback on the opening 20,000 words of your manuscript from one of our hand-picked editors. They’ll read your work and give you a full report on what’s working, and what needs work.
FOR: Writers you’d like an expert option on whether or not their idea ‘has legs’.
PRICE: $$ - This is a great budget editorial option for those who need feedback, but can’t afford a full-manuscript read.




For writers with a full finished draft


OPTION 1: The Self-Edit Your Novel course

This course boasts a HUGE 1-in-4 publication success record. Join our own Debi Alper and Emma Darwin for the online tutored course that sells out months in advance.
FOR: Writers with a finished first draft who want to learn skills they can apply to their whole career – not just one book.
PRICE: $$ - Covering six weeks online tuition with an intimate group.


OPTION 2: Full manuscript assessment

This is by far our most popular editorial service, and for good reason. Our handpicked editors will read your full-manuscript and give you a 3000 word+ report on what’s working and what needs improving.
FOR: Writers who keep getting rejected and don’t know why, or who know SOMETHING is wrong, but aren’t sure what.
PRICE: $$ - $$$ - Dependent on word count.

OPTION 3: Copyediting / Line editing / Proofreading

Get your manuscript copy-edited by a professional editor. Our eagle-eyed editors will check your work for spelling and punctuation errors, covering things like inconsistencies, clarity and typos.
FOR: In general, we recommend writers DON’T take this option unless you’re self-publishing or are writing with English as a second language.
PRICE: $$ - $$$ - Dependent on word count.




For writers submitting to agents and getting rejected


OPTION 1: Agent Submission pack review

Get feedback on your query letter, synopsis and opening 10,000 words. Our editors will advise on what elements of your submission aren’t working and give much-needed feedback.
FOR: Writers getting rejections, or needing a confidence boost prior to submitting.
PRCIE: $$ - One-size fits all manuscripts!

OPTION 2: Ask Jericho query review service

If you’re a member of Jericho Writers, our team will give you feedback on your query letter for free and offer advice on how to make your submission stronger.
FOR: Writers who need affordable, expert advice.
PRICE: $ - All included as part of your Jericho Writers membership.




For writers on a budget


OPTION 1: The Jericho Writers Membership

We created the membership to offer brilliant writers advice from experts for a fraction of the price it costs to get them in a room, live. Watch video masterclasses, take video course, connect to agents via webinar, use our AgentMatch search engine, get free feedback from us – it's all included in one flat fee per month or year.
FOR: Writers at any stage, writing in every genre – there's something for everyone and we’re adding more all the time.
PRICE: $ - No lock-ins and free-cancellation. You’ll also get discounts on most of the services above, too!




Wherever you are with your writing – help is available. Whether you want to throw yourself in the top end and get serious, or join the thousands of others in our membership – we've got you.
And for those who are under-represented for on a low-income, don’t forget we have ongoing bursary opportunities, too.
If you'd like to speak to us about any of our services/courses before applying or signing up, we'd love to hear from you. You can phone us on +44 (0) 345 459 9560* or email info@jerichowriters.com.
Maria | Course Manager
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