First draft of the first few chapters of 'Thorde: Keeper of the trysk'

Have just printed off my first draft of the first few chapters of my WIP YA fantasy novel 'Thorde'.  I am going to edit it and start work on the character biographies, synopsis, my biography etc. that I have to send to the competition that ends on the 30th.  If you are new to the blog and wish to read the first three chapters of Thorde, please go to the previous blog posts and select the ones in relation to Thorde.  I have also posted several of my poems, short stories and the first three chapters of other novels I am working on including a romantic comedy, a crime thriller and another YA fantasy entitled Quantum Worlds.  Let me know what you think...........