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Wednesday, 4 February 2015
Yorkshire Writers' Newsletter February 2015 Part I
Here is the first part of the Yorkshire Writers' Newsletter, with details of workshops and courses, that I thought my followers would be interested in seeing:
Tuesday, 3 February 2015
Cleckheaton Writers Group (CWG) meeting 2 February 2015
The CWG met last night at Cleckheaton Library and P, M, J & I were in attendance, K, P, S and L having passed on their apologies.
Work In Progress Update: M informed the members that since the last meeting she had submitted a travel writing piece to her IWC (Itinerant Writers Club), I had edited the beginning of my crime novel TPB and entered it into the NWAs, and P had been working on the story that she and J work-shopped at the last meeting for a Writing Magazine first line competition (deadline 14 February). She has been tinkering with it since the last meeting and has decided to send it off.
P showed the members the March edition of the Writing Magazine (she is a subscriber so receives advance copies) which has a free supplement book The Writers Bank: a guide to rights and licensing, that may be of use.
Feedback Sessions: As K was not in attendance, M then shared her piece MSLD with the group (P kindly read it out to those who had not had chance to read it) for feedback. M informed the group that she had taken out the last line of the short story from the feedback she had already received from the members via email, but J felt that this would depend on where the story was sent. It was agreed by all that the visual similes (e.g. floozy garden) were fantastic and that the yearning of the character comes through, in a Reggie Perrin-esque way.
M revealed that two of her short stories had been shortlisted for a slim volume flash fiction anthology which was exciting news, we look forward to seeing them in print.
Workshops/Author Events: K told the other members about the upcoming Leeds Trinity Writers Day, the Leeds Indie Writers Day, the Huddersfield Literature Festival and the Leeds Meet the Agent event.
It was agreed that the feedback sessions at the next meeting would be for J (flash fiction), P (flash fiction) and K (beginning of crime novel) and they agreed to forward these to the members via email prior to the 16th.
K informed the members that the Friends of Cleckheaton Library was this coming Monday at 7pm at the 14th Scout building and it was agreed that those members that could, should come along to the meeting for support.
P and J informed K that they were unable to attend the CLF planning meeting on Thursday.
As only M had sent K three short stories for consideration for the planned CWG anthology, it was decided that all CWG members should send their pieces for consideration to the other members of the CWG as soon as possible. It was agreed that the anthology would be best made up of short stories, flash fiction and poetry rather than sections of longer work, so every member should send 2/3 pieces for consideration at a future meeting where the best ones (as decided by the whole of CWG) can be chosen. A suggestion for a title of the anthology was put forward by John: Mixed Nuts, for consideration.
The next meeting of the CWG will take place in a fortnight on Monday 16 February 2015 at 6-8pm in Cleckheaton Library.
Work In Progress Update: M informed the members that since the last meeting she had submitted a travel writing piece to her IWC (Itinerant Writers Club), I had edited the beginning of my crime novel TPB and entered it into the NWAs, and P had been working on the story that she and J work-shopped at the last meeting for a Writing Magazine first line competition (deadline 14 February). She has been tinkering with it since the last meeting and has decided to send it off.
P showed the members the March edition of the Writing Magazine (she is a subscriber so receives advance copies) which has a free supplement book The Writers Bank: a guide to rights and licensing, that may be of use.
Feedback Sessions: As K was not in attendance, M then shared her piece MSLD with the group (P kindly read it out to those who had not had chance to read it) for feedback. M informed the group that she had taken out the last line of the short story from the feedback she had already received from the members via email, but J felt that this would depend on where the story was sent. It was agreed by all that the visual similes (e.g. floozy garden) were fantastic and that the yearning of the character comes through, in a Reggie Perrin-esque way.
M revealed that two of her short stories had been shortlisted for a slim volume flash fiction anthology which was exciting news, we look forward to seeing them in print.
Workshops/Author Events: K told the other members about the upcoming Leeds Trinity Writers Day, the Leeds Indie Writers Day, the Huddersfield Literature Festival and the Leeds Meet the Agent event.
It was agreed that the feedback sessions at the next meeting would be for J (flash fiction), P (flash fiction) and K (beginning of crime novel) and they agreed to forward these to the members via email prior to the 16th.
K informed the members that the Friends of Cleckheaton Library was this coming Monday at 7pm at the 14th Scout building and it was agreed that those members that could, should come along to the meeting for support.
P and J informed K that they were unable to attend the CLF planning meeting on Thursday.
As only M had sent K three short stories for consideration for the planned CWG anthology, it was decided that all CWG members should send their pieces for consideration to the other members of the CWG as soon as possible. It was agreed that the anthology would be best made up of short stories, flash fiction and poetry rather than sections of longer work, so every member should send 2/3 pieces for consideration at a future meeting where the best ones (as decided by the whole of CWG) can be chosen. A suggestion for a title of the anthology was put forward by John: Mixed Nuts, for consideration.
The next meeting of the CWG will take place in a fortnight on Monday 16 February 2015 at 6-8pm in Cleckheaton Library.
Monday, 2 February 2015
Phoenix Nights Live review
Went to see Phoenix Nights Live at the Manchester Arena last night with my husband and although we were right up in the Gods, at least we were facing the stage (though for the last of the set, we half wished we had been sat at the sides).
Following the tragic beginning to the first show on Saturday night when Ted Robbins who plays Den Perry sadly collapsed on stage, thankfully he is resting comfortably in Manchester General and all TPC fans wish him a speedy recovery, I am sure the audience did not want such a dramatic ending to the second performance.
WARNING, contains spoilers
The show started with the eponymous Brian Potter (Peter Kay) coming down a in a stair lift only for it to break half-way down and Ray Von having to utilise his particular electrical 'skills,' whilst the Phoenix Club's house band Los Alanos (Les Campbell - Toby Foster and Alan - Steve Edge) entertained a lovely club-land mash up of top tunes such as Uptown Funk, which led into a lovely banter with the deaf signer. Then followed a series of 'turns' featuring Kenny 'Dalglish' Senior (Archie Kelly), Young Kenny (Justin Moorhouse) and Holy Mary (Janice Connolly) who constantly reminded herself to open and close her flaps whilst picking out the tombola numbers.
The second half started with a full lights-flashing set of 'tunes' from Shabba himself Ray Von (Neil Fitzmaurice) which got the audience going, but it turned slightly sinister when he filled his decks with Too Little Boys, Jim'll Fix It For You and I Wanna Be In Your Gang. A brilliant turn by Jerry St Clair (Dave Spikey), Psychic Medium Clinton Baptiste (Alex Lowe) and a wonderful finale with
Patrick 'Paddy' O'Shea (Paddy McGuinness) and Maxell 'Max' Bygraves (Peter Kay) who have a dance-off with the elderly Asian men and midget football fans (as featured in Ep1 S2).
We felt that the second half captured the essence of the show more than the first, but the Young Kenny turn as Meatloaf seemed out of place (possibly a last minute replacement for Ted Robbins' Den Perry, and if you have tickets for any of the other performances, you are in for a great night.
Sunday, 1 February 2015
The School Gate Survival Guide by Kerry Fisher book review
This is not the sort of book I normally choose to read, it being a romance, but I thought I would try to expand from my normal genres this year and this is the first book that falls into this category.
BLURB: Maia is a cleaner for ladies who lunch.
With mops and buckets in tow, she spends her days dashing from house to house cleaning up after them, as they rush from one exhausting Pilates class to the next.
But an unusual inheritance catapults her and her children into the very exclusive world of Stirling Hall - a place where no child can survive without organic apricots and no woman goes a week without a manicure.
As Maia and her children, Bronte and Harley, try to settle into their new life, Maia is inadvertently drawn to the man who can help her family fit in. But is his interest in her purely professional? And will it win her any favours at the school gate?
Maia Etxeleku comes from a background as far removed from her clients worlds that it is funny, but it is a huge shock to her when her favourite cleaning client, the elderly Professor Rose Stainton who was encouraging her to apply to study a degree, passes and she is left realising that apart from her children, her time with Rose was the highlight of her week. Having to grieve on her own as her layabout husband Colin has no sympathy, she resigns herself to not only losing some of her income but the death of the dream of going to University. But things are not as black as they seem, when the Professor's lawyers contact her to tell her that she has left a monetary gift to her in her will with the proviso that Maia use it to further her children's education at the prestigious Stirling Hall school.
Following a battle of wills with Colin, Maia does get him to agree to let the children go to the school, but they feel like fishes out of water surrounded by the elite, until that is, Clover comes to their rescue. Clover is a generous and warm woman with a unique parenting and personal style who takes Maia under her wing and helps her negotiate the new world she is inhabiting, as does the Head of the Upper School, the enigmatic Mr Peters.
I enjoyed the playfulness of the writing, the Clover character in particular was very engaging, but was disappointed in the ending which seemed rushed and somewhat tagged on. I had also guessed very quickly about her friend Sandy but I only had suspicions about the Professor. For me, the romance was secondary to the cautionary tale that money cannot buy you happiness, only a confident sense of self-worth can, and I was just pleased that the characters were out from under the roof of the unsavoury Colin.
Previously self-published as The Class Ceiling, Fisher is now published Harper Collins, The School Gate Survival Guide is published by Avon Books UK. Fisher has said on a fellow bloggers site that she is glad that this was part of her route to publication as it taught her how to make the most of her traditional publishing opportunity. It is easy to see why the book was picked up by a traditional publisher as Fisher's open style pulls you in like you are listening to a friend telling you all about their weekend. Her second book the Divorce Domino, where the middle-aged protagonist Octavia wants to feel young again, is due out in 2015 and she is currently working on her third novel about how secrets get more toxic as the pass down through the generations.
It's not just the kids who have the tantrums 6.5/10
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